Sense of You ⁓ (she taught me)

English [Shakespearean] Sonnet | In homage to one* VERY endearing to my heart.💖

Author's Note

Painting, The POETESS, oil on canvas,
courtesy of Pinterest, artist unknown.

Please, feel free to offer well-meant critique. : )

Reviews

[lovelymarina]

Ahh- the sonnets are very different from free verse. It is all making great sense now… this one rhymes throughout, whereas free verse flows but does not particularly need rhyming. I’d say this is less of my style, but that’s a personal preference. This poem is articulated beautifully… the image of love and what it’s like to be infatuated and deeply into a partner. There’s something that makes Sonnets so graceful…

[Richard🖌]

From Lovely Marina

Yet, another charming review to lean upon, reveling in its afterglow of scintillating intelligence, genuinely natural bent, with a uniquely natural prodigal, almost intuitive appreciation and recognition for intricacies and refinements of this challenging form over others.
When you're ready, at your behest, I'll teach you the Sonnet, and you'll be able to compose your thoughts, feelings, emotions … all your pen can unfold in a powerfully impacting you'll never be able to in any other form … this is the most flexible of all poetic forms, and once learned, will allow composing in all forms far more masterfully.
The Sonnet is, indeed, the Rolls Royce of poetry, a form only the skilled few have mastered.
In an opportune moment, take a look-see at this'n:

Thanks ever-so gratefully; I cherish your beautifully coherent reviews.
You're special, Mariana … warmest hugs to you! ⁓ Richard 🍃

[Richard🖌]

https://www.writerscafe.org/writing/RichardJ/1805226/

[Lisasview]

Good morning Richard,
Your beautiful Sonnet spoke to my heart. I loved every word..the wonderful picture.. the choice of color.
Not sure what my favourite line is... impossible to pick..
I just know that I love this style of writing..
Lisa

[Richard🖌]

To thee as-well, Dear Poetess🔆

Ahhh, just as I suspected, Lisa, you're a true sonneteer at heart. One can tell right away … the reader who feels and loves them, and the reviewed who wrote them.
It's good to know that each, the picture and color choice you've mentioned, though, pleasing to the mind's-eye, are enhanced or diminished accordingly, by virtue of the sonneteer's quality of ink.
From your gracious accolades, I've scant doubt you think my Sonnet enhanced both picture and color.

And, I'm ever-so pleased you think so … thank you, Dear Lisa ⁓ Richard🖌

[Lisasview]

Yes, you are correct.. I am drawn to Sonnets..although not good at them yet..
Your Sonnet sang to me..and, off the page into my heart.. Guess I am a romantic at heart.. Love the feeling I get when reading this and your other Sonnets and Poems..
Lisa

[Richard🖌]

I am ever-so thrilled to oblige thee, M'Lady 🍎

[Cherrie]

There is such endearment to be found in a sonnet. This form calls to the reader and so clearly declares the heart. So beautifully penned, Richard this is truly delightful poem.

[Richard🖌]

Ahhhh, M'Lovely Poetess🍒

Your words in review, a poem in themselves, sing a sweet song of deeper understanding than most feel, or express … then, the gentle encouragement of your praise lends a touch of appreciative grace to my pen's humble efforts.

Thank you ever-so warmly, Cherrie ⁓ Richard🍃

[NotUsinganymore]

Very great poem with vivid detail. I enjoyed it

[Richard🖌]

Thank you, JungLee,

For selecting this Sonnet homage to the special one who taught me so much I would not have otherwise seen, come to feel, and understand.
Your praise and expressed enjoyment are, indeed, welcome gratification for an olde bard's earnest efforts.

With most grateful blessings! ⁓ Richard 🍃

[NotUsinganymore]

Thak you very much!

[lightsong]

well now for sure I feel stupid and maybe I should check my brain memorizing ability some time? of course after You mentioned it beneath my photo I remembered, it's still one of the most beautiful paintings that touches me really deep and I find 85% if not all of me in her, makes me think of reusing it as my avatar here?! as for your sonnet, who dares to say anything about our Master poet but that it is a real masterpiece, one thing I've learned about your poetry during all these years, You always combine life and love as one, You speak of life as it's love, and You speak of love as it's life, not surprising for the human being I know You are made of, and all come gently as a healing grace. beautiful Syr❤️

[Richard🖌]

Hm?
Ghounwah, dear poetess 💫

If there is anything I ever learned about You in all our years serving together on poetry sites, its that I've never once thought of you as stupid.
Time can thin one's memory in detail of something beautiful, but never the quality and essence of how it felt.
What you say is true, for I, too, can see so very much of You in this painting's gently graceful, peaceful, and incomparably lovely figure (I can conceive of no more perfect avatar for you) … the Sonnet, as-well, strikes me the same.
Your praise and heart-dancing compliments of my humble poetic efforts, never fail to encourage and gratify an olde bard's hopes that he's deeply pleased at least one reader.
The ways you speak of me and my writing are, indeed a healing "Light" … and warmly embraced, in so many ways.

Thank you once again, Dear Ghounwah, as always! ⁓ Richard 🍃

[lightsong]

"at least one reader." and another thing I've learned that there are "countless readers" whom he did please.

[Richard🖌]

B l u s h !*

[kitty]

Words can tell how much we care, for softly in the ear they go and magnify the heart. Tis good to know how lovers feel even though they are far apart.

[Richard🖌]

Oh-yes, M'Dear Kitty 💐

And, I can certainly tell by the very nature and tender caress of your words, just how very much you care; especially, in the way they touch a bard's thrumming heart. ❤️

Isn't it wonderful, how neither distance nor absence diminishes love in the least?
Thank you ever-so warmly, Lady Kitty ⁓ Richard 🍃

[kitty]

Thank you so much, M'Lord! Stay safe.

[Intothemilkyway]

Truly and wonderfully a great poem. I love the way you write and interpret things.

[Richard🖌]

Thank you, Dear Poetess! 🌸

The gentle sweetness of your voice,
touching soft and kind …
singing a thrill, like that of birds,
so tenderly caressed my mind.

You've inspired me … smiles 'n hugs! ⁓ Richard🍃

[Intothemilkyway]

Oh,iam so very pleased to hear that. You just made my day ^^

[Richard🖌]

Anything,
For a kind, sweet Lady-Poet. : )

[Cassie]

Love is a very beautiful thing, look at what it has brought forth, this wonderful piece of poetry that is full of wonderful symbolism

[Richard🖌]

When a poetess of your stature graces my page, the very air sparkles in brilliance from your wondrously warming smile.
Lady Cassie,
Seems your words were kissed by love, itself … something in me feels it's so.

Thank you ever-so warmly for your sweet touch … happy hugs! ⁓ Richard 🍃

[Cassie]

ohh My gosh!!! Richard you are too much love all mixed together with honey and all good things

[Susan 🦋]

Tis how true love's are... that what the heart speaks resonates deep within the soul. Forever.

[Richard🖌]

Such lovely words of sentiment you've shared, Susan : )

Thank you so very much! ⁓ Richard 🍃

[Karmee]

This is just so lovely, i love that picture that you used. Very pretty write.

[Richard🖌]

Thank you, Silent K : )
Are you new here?
If so, welcome to the Café, and a big thank you for reading and reviewing this lovely piece, for such inspiring compliments, and for loving anything about it.

A big SMILE to repay your for the one you gave me! ⁓ Richard 🍃

[Karmee]

No i am not new here, I was going by another name.