Our Love⁓* (in homage)

15-Word Free Verse: "Though oceans were a pool of ink, 'twould take twice more to write our love."

Author's Note

" OUR LOVE "

Though, oceans were a pool of ink,
'twould take twice more to
write our love.

Picture courtesy of Pinterest.
The font is "Ruritania" in the color "cantaloupe"; the background is "ink black".

Please, feel free to critique or comment with well-meant intent! : )

Reviews

[kitty]

Olde the English that thou dist write pon parchment that preserves the sentiments of thy words M'lord. They go beyond the heart and soul to a far and sentimental place. You write for lovers and those consumed by love. 'But oh, for the tender grace of a time long gone ..." (irreversible in space).

[Richard🖌]

Ah, Lady Kitty,
How splendidly your words spoil and olde bard with your touches of poetical bliss, but who's complaining! ; )

Big hug of happy thanks! ⁓ Richard 🍃

[Lydia Shutter]

Utterly and splendiferously romantic. Heavy sigh! Have to say, I couldn't read the fancy font, but read it in the Author's Note. Lydi**

[Richard🖌]

Hi, Dear Lydi 🥀
My warmest thank you for blessing this little ditty in homage to the vast expanses of romantic love ✶ with the soft, sweet touch of your heartfelt words.
I adore the word "splendiferously".

I'm so pleased my message came to You … happy hug! ⁓ Richard 🍃

[lightsong]

when they say few words speak it all, here but the real example, beautiful most meaningful words, and like always perfect presentation and font, brilliant one Richard.

[Richard🖌]

Thank you ever-so warmly, Dear Ghoumwah 🍂
Your lovely, encouraging words of favor and approval, gift this little piece so very much more depth of meaning for me.

Your praise and appreciation are my sustenance! ⁓ Richard 🍃

[lightsong]

You deserve it all, and all the praises You get from me or anyone else here :)

[Robert Trakofler]

Nicely expressed good sir I guess you better keep writing that’s a lot of pages:)

[Richard🖌]

Hi, there Robert : )
Thank you for the early morning grin … I've ordered truckload of ocean ink.

I am most grateful for your very nice compliment, My Friend! ⁓ Richard 🍃

[Robert Trakofler]

Hey this is shrinking nicely

[heavenscentgirl1]

A most beautiful Romantic poem written in an unusual form for you. Even with the economical use of words you are able to share deep heartfelt passion that flows right off the page into each chamber of my heart. As always, I am left in awe of your Poetry Richard. I’m sending A BIG thank you with warm hugs and many Blessings your way. Mj 😇

[Richard🖌]

Thank you, Dear Mary Jo : )
I once read, somewhere, of a good poet that, "The more said with the fewest words requires the greatest skill," but you know how verbose I can be … LOL!

Thank you for your beautiful words of praise and expressed enjoyment … you're a lovely flower🌸 ⁓ Richard 🍃

[heavenscentgirl1]

You are very welcome and definitely got your message across with just those few words ~ but I also love the Grand Verbose Poetry that you so eloquently compose. Thank you for sharing your words with us Richard. I also appreciate being compared to a flower. Warm hugs & Blessings being sent your way 🤗🙏. Mj😇

[Carola]

comprehending 'free verse' normally seems to elude me, except for your poems richard, you're a great wordsmith !!
your passionate words in fancy font, plus the photo, makes the overall effect a visually attractive poem.
i appreciate your words, though i couldn't in all honesty say i'm a romantic.
cheerio carola

[Richard🖌]

Well, Sweet Lady Carola 🥀
I certainly feel the romantic side of your lovely heart warming the page, just right, beneath this gently touching piece. ; )
And, just look at how charmingly you gratify my little efforts to please, with the your delightfully encouraging praise.

I am so very pleased you find favor in this presentation, Carola, and "a great wordsmith" … oh-MY!

Thank you ever-so warmly, Dear Poetess! ⁓ Richard 🍃

[Carola]

you certainly have a wonderful way with words & a warm way of expression richard.
i would like to think that eventually i could learn this too, but i know in my heart this will never be so, 'cos i'm very pragmatic & more technical & not really romantic, which in this discipline is not an advantage.
cheerio carola