FREE STYLE … a good poet friend and I were sharing a bit of our backgrounds the other day, and sitting this morning contemplating it all, this came to me … hope you enjoy.
Different. No critique here. Excellent, enjoyable. A piece worth reading over and contemplating its contents, working along similar lines with one's own life story. Good to know that the object of this piece has been able to live a full life without pain or regrets. Tis good to have travelled life's bumpy road and reached its apex in contented defiance of all the knocks encountered. Hats off to Him/her, my 'friend'! Actions justified/glorified!
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Thank you, Kitty Dear 🍂
For traveling along for awhile down my path of life's adventures.<.. read moreThank you, Kitty Dear 🍂
For traveling along for awhile down my path of life's adventures.
It is refreshingly exciting to know you relate, and that you understand the ways of a rover, too.
Regrets? I have many.
Rewards and pleasures? Many, many more! ; )
Had trouble the first couple of times getting the "read more" to work.
5 Years Ago
The road at times may seem arduous bit the thrills anong the way more than compensates, dear Sir!
5 Years Ago
I see what you mean about the read more senario. It repeated about four times. Never mind it was a p.. read moreI see what you mean about the read more senario. It repeated about four times. Never mind it was a pleasure!
ahahaha great theme for all those whose hearts are joined by road and rail .. you know free verse is what i feel akin to but aside from that its a great choice for this story says i! it isn't language i personally speak with .. but it does lift the flavor of your poem ... its a grounded closing sir! .. but the other side of that coin will sigh ... no matter how long an anchor holds ... still that call is sighing on the wind and waves ;)
E.
Posted 5 Years Ago
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5 Years Ago
True, Gene,
My thinks, "once a rover, always a rover", if only in the heart and spirit. .. read moreTrue, Gene,
My thinks, "once a rover, always a rover", if only in the heart and spirit.
Thank you for reading this sentimental little piece to wanderers everywhere, wherever they may roam.
Different. No critique here. Excellent, enjoyable. A piece worth reading over and contemplating its contents, working along similar lines with one's own life story. Good to know that the object of this piece has been able to live a full life without pain or regrets. Tis good to have travelled life's bumpy road and reached its apex in contented defiance of all the knocks encountered. Hats off to Him/her, my 'friend'! Actions justified/glorified!
Posted 5 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
This comment has been deleted by the poster.
This comment has been deleted by the poster.
5 Years Ago
Thank you, Kitty Dear 🍂
For traveling along for awhile down my path of life's adventures.<.. read moreThank you, Kitty Dear 🍂
For traveling along for awhile down my path of life's adventures.
It is refreshingly exciting to know you relate, and that you understand the ways of a rover, too.
Regrets? I have many.
Rewards and pleasures? Many, many more! ; )
Had trouble the first couple of times getting the "read more" to work.
5 Years Ago
The road at times may seem arduous bit the thrills anong the way more than compensates, dear Sir!
5 Years Ago
I see what you mean about the read more senario. It repeated about four times. Never mind it was a p.. read moreI see what you mean about the read more senario. It repeated about four times. Never mind it was a pleasure!