Happy Valentine's Day to you sir! wonderful poem .. had absolutely no thought to change one thing .. the comfort in your quatrains with iambs is like a favorite pillow for ones head ... would gladly read this to me love! :)
E.
ps.V2 L4 especially blesses me ... i think of our Lord Jesus' love and as the Bible teaches those who prefer it ... He knows us by name
Posted 6 Years Ago
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
Thank you, Dear Gene!
Ever, you're a great reviewer of poetry for every writer lucky enough t.. read moreThank you, Dear Gene!
Ever, you're a great reviewer of poetry for every writer lucky enough to receive your words, and seldom it is one of my humble pieces escapes an edit by virtue of your keen eye.
Thus, that you've found this wee romantic verse with completely acceptable merit, truly blesses an olde bard's heart.
Thank you, My Very Fine Friend … I truly hope your lady enjoys your loving recital! ⁓ Richard : )
Happy Valentine's Day to you, hope you have a blessed one. Very lovely write you have written
Posted 6 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
Thank you ever-so sincerely, Ryanna 🌼
You've made my evening smile … Happy Valentine's D.. read moreThank you ever-so sincerely, Ryanna 🌼
You've made my evening smile … Happy Valentine's Day to You, too.
I am truly thrilled you found such favor in this little bit of warm, romantic verse.
Your compliment is just the lovely touch it needed! ⁓ Richard ; )
Thank you, Ardra Dear 🌸
For selecting this romantic little piece to kick-off Valentine's .. read moreThank you, Ardra Dear 🌸
For selecting this romantic little piece to kick-off Valentine's Day for lovers everywhere.
I am so very happy you think if is sweet, that you're sure I'd get loads of yeses, too, and for always enjoying my wee writings.
But, "cheesy lines"?
Cheesy (adjective): tacky, cheap, tawdry; trite; informal: corny … LOL!
A Big Happy Valentine's Day HUG! ⁓ Richard ; )
6 Years Ago
I meant cheesy in the good way... heheh not any of what u mentioned above... :l
Happy Valentine's Day to you sir! wonderful poem .. had absolutely no thought to change one thing .. the comfort in your quatrains with iambs is like a favorite pillow for ones head ... would gladly read this to me love! :)
E.
ps.V2 L4 especially blesses me ... i think of our Lord Jesus' love and as the Bible teaches those who prefer it ... He knows us by name
Posted 6 Years Ago
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
6 Years Ago
Thank you, Dear Gene!
Ever, you're a great reviewer of poetry for every writer lucky enough t.. read moreThank you, Dear Gene!
Ever, you're a great reviewer of poetry for every writer lucky enough to receive your words, and seldom it is one of my humble pieces escapes an edit by virtue of your keen eye.
Thus, that you've found this wee romantic verse with completely acceptable merit, truly blesses an olde bard's heart.
Thank you, My Very Fine Friend … I truly hope your lady enjoys your loving recital! ⁓ Richard : )