I know Why You Love Bubble Baths (adoration)

I know Why You Love Bubble Baths (adoration)

A Poem by Richard🖌
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Free Verse: This poem was created entirely from the enjoyable fun of imagination. ; )

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I know why you love bubble baths:

it’s the joy they bring,

the sly smile they leave

curling at the corners of your mouth --

playful, inviting, seductive,

as you slip slowwwly down …


water displacing just enough

so that liquid lips can lick you,

as feet, then hips, then stomach

submerge into frothy warmth,

eliciting a contented sighhh

as lathered fingers stretch

to caress those great peaks --

lingering, just above the surface.


And, standing at doorway's edge

(I, a silent unseen voyeur),

realize I’m jealous

of the bubbles kissing you,

of their shameless effort 

to conspire with the soap,

the shampoo, and the water

to hold you …

for just a while longer.


I shouldn’t be jealous,

because in truth, we’re just the same.

I’m forever conspiring with Nature

to give me one more minute,

one more breath, one more kiss.


Oh, yes!

I know why you love bubble baths --

it’s for the same reasons

that for all these years,

I've loved You.

© 2021 Richard🖌


Author's Note

Richard🖌
Photo Illustration, © Veronika Santos: Snapshot of an artistic pin-up rendering.

Well-meant, constructive comments and critique are always welcome! : )

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Bubble baths are truly enchanting. You are truly an expert in writing about any topic, salute to you! You add the right amount of sensuality for readers like me to feel tingles running down their spine. My favourite line: "
water displacing just enough
so that liquid lips can lick you," is so imaginative, you make it sound as if the bubble bath was a person having a nice time with the woman you love, adding personification ( I think !!) to a bubble bath is amazing, The last stanza :

" Oh, yes!
I know why you love bubble baths --
it’s for the same reasons
that for all these years,
I've loved You." : is heart touching, why does she love bubble baths? because of its enchanting and warming sensations, the same reason this person loves the woman. That is enough to make a persons heart melt. Truly a wonderful write!



Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard🖌

2 Years Ago

Well, Lovely Aura 💦

When next you're immersed in your warm, sudsy-soft, tingly bub.. read more



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The imagery being expressed in this cleverly woven piece is captivating. I couldn't help but notice how well the words flowed from line to line, as if they themselves were like water. Especially with many of the words containing the sultry "s" in them... slid pleasantly off the tongue.

I thoroughly enjoyed this piece!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard🖌

5 Years Ago

Hi there, Shakier!
It's so satisfying to see you spotted this sibilantly sweet, sensually swe.. read more
Sarah K Cass

5 Years Ago

Really makes me want to slide into a lovely deep tub of hot bubbly water!
Richard🖌

5 Years Ago

Thanks for reading, Sessy ; )
I'm so glad this little teaser had such a nice effect.
<.. read more
i'm so jealous Richard ;) and she's so beautiful ...in all her bubbling aspects ... that thought of being those sudsy comforters will stay with me today ... in a voyeur's dream ... nice read for me...love the time piece pic! mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
E.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard&#128396;

5 Years Ago

Howdy, Gene!
I was wondering what you might think of this sensually snazzy little voyeuristic.. read more
Einstein Noodle

5 Years Ago

;) .................
Amazing as always, Richard, my friend. And to me it was just dang funny.
As always, I appreciate your dedication to ParachutePoetry. Keep churning these out and I will keep regarding them fondly.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Richard&#128396;

5 Years Ago

Thank you, Louis, most appreciatively.
How happy it makes me you found humor in this lightly .. read more

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