May's First Kiss (romantic cowrite with Light)

Ricalai form (see Author's Note for instructions)

~ May's First Kiss ~

 Carry us through whiffs of rain …
willing fragrance, fresh and fain.
New visions of May, bless us from today.

Flowers grow inside our room …
soothing colors in full bloom;
a heart-kissed bouquet in each tender spray.
 
Warm blushes caress our faces …
teardrops’ gratitude graces.
Love wakes to obey, instantly portray.

High from May’s ebony night,
voices of stars singing bright
chant a sweet array of choral display.

The painting of Lover's rise
fondly emerge from our eyes …
drunken fire-sparks sway, frames leaning to pray.

Embraced in pure ecstasy,
depths of our passions set free;
that each moment stay a warming foray.

" Oh, precious moon, fill the night
with voices of sweet delight …
spread glorious ray o’er our ardent play.

Bless our lips with May's first kiss

of matrimonial bliss.

May, in every way ~ love never betray.

Cowrite by

Light & Richard

© 14 May 2018

Author's Note

Ricalai
(Rĭk ŭh lay)
Original form created by
Richard W. Jenkins,
© 21 Nov 2009

Composition:
Five verses minimum of 7/7/5-5 syllable-count each,
aligned left with a right indent or centered,
with the following rhyme-scheme
on any topic desired:

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Etc...

Painting: Selection by Light, courtesy of Pinterest.
Be sure to review this on Light's page, too … I know she will appreciate it in turn with one of her lovely hallmark reviews: http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/RSong/2028696/

Constructive, well-meant critique is always welcome! : )

Reviews

[lightsong]

I really don't know what to say since You've said it all absolutely and fully beautiful in Your review to me, so let me again give You my deepest thanks and sincere gratitude for accepting my request, allowing us to do this, and for enduring with me, for doing it until it's "perfect" , without You it wouldn't be.

Thank You again dear Syr, for gracing me and many many out there with Your incomparable skills and talents, and I hope they will enjoy our lovely romantic effort today as much as I've enjoyed reading it again now.

Your ever admiring fan,
Littlesong*

[Richard🖌]

Well, Dear GH,
I think with your generously exciting invitation and form choice, all your hard work and due diligence, coupled with your immaculate choices of font, color, and painting, all that could be said to someone as pleasantly surprised and pleased as I am, you've said … and so much more.
You are a sheer joy to write with; especially, considering your normal skill is not rhyming poetry … you truly amazed me with how quickly and easily you made your portions seem, and just look at how beautifully our poem turned out. : )
In all my years involved with poetry, I can count the numbers of times I've cowritten on one hand, and when you asked me to I did not hesitate for a moment … thank you ever-so warmly and gratefully for such a delightful surprise.

Humbly and blissfully, I bow! ⁓ Richard

[lightsong]

Awa! that's so much, BLUSH*

[Richard🖌]

I'm the one blessed. ; )

[Silmara McGarry]

Absolutely magnificent! My kind of poem indeed. I am SO glad I read it. Super fresh, enchanting up to the soul. Wonderful title, and the picture BEAUTIFUL!!!! :-):-):-)

[Richard🖌]

Ah, M'Dear Sil 🌸
How wondrously you express yourself in conveying such warming appreciation and enjoyment of this sweetly romantic piece.

I am so very pleased to share it with you … my most joyful hug of thanks! ⁓ Richard 🍃

[Mari' Emeraude]

What a lovely breath of fresh air this verse is. Everything about these lines are bursting with romance from days when romance itself was still tender and pure.

[Richard🖌]

Oh, Mari' 🌺
Your voice, so sweet and pure as those days of romance, returning us to our hearts' tenderest caresses.

With my warmest embrace, I thank you, Dear Lady-Poet! ⁓ Richard 🍃

[Richard🖌]

Mari',
Sometimes the site will miss letting me know of a review, and I'll not realize it until I come across it … this happened here, but I love your review as much now as I would have 7 months ago (maybe, more). : )

[Mari' Emeraude]

Thank you! Yeah I know, it's happened to me too. I won't find a review until months later so it's not that I'm ungrateful, just not very observant. ;

[heavenscentgirl1]

A very nice piece of collaboration - which touches my heart in many ways. ☹️😘

[Richard🖌]

Thank you, Mary Jo, for reading this lovely cowrite, for your nice compliment, and shared sentiments.

Brightest blessings to thee 🌟 ⁓ Richard

[AYVID N]

Dear Richard,
My heartfelt compliments to you and Light on this beautiful creation, a labor of love. The poem has an impressive rhyming scheme and equally stunning word choice and read aloud it just flows like a lilting, rhythmic stream. May the magic of May never die.

[Richard🖌]

Oh, Divya!
I am sooo thrilled you've come today to read and leave such sweet loveliness as only You can upon my page.
Thank you ever-so warmly and gratefully for your heartfelt compliments gifted this lovely little cowrite with Light … your bliss-filled words of praise and expressed appreciation really make it sing and dance*
I was surprised when she asked me to cowrite, but was amazed when she selected this challenging form in rhyme and meter, and just look at how excellently she did. I know she'll love your review as much as I do. : )

You've not only made me happy by returning, you've gifted me the joy of sharing with you again … warmest smiles 'n hugs, M'Lady! ⁓ Richard x0x

[AYVID N]

Its a pleasure always, dear Richard ❤

[Neville]

A great poem if I may say so... beautifully crafted by the pair of you.... Neville

[Richard🖌]

I really appreciate it when a fellow poet enjoys my poetry and finds such favor in it as you have, and double-so when I know Light will read your words, too.

Bless you, Neville, for your gracious review and for reading our first ever lovely little effort! ⁓ Richard : )

[Neville]

No worries, no problem, my pleasure entirely my good friend... I have already shared my view with the lovely Light...... N

[Richard🖌]

Then, I am sure you left her smiling. ; )

[Neville]

Hey it seems we are all chuffed...... N

[Richard🖌]

How wonderful that would be, eh?

[Neville]

it most surely would....

[Eva]

Very airy and light tone. It was like a gentle breeze was carrying you along as you read this beautifully worded piece. The image matches the tone of the piece and adds a little something extra. "Flowers grow inside our room … soothing colors in full bloom; a heart-kissed bouquet in each tender spray." were my favorite lines. I could fully imagine this lovely scene as well as the rest. Very lovely piece. Well done Richard!

[Richard🖌]

Beautifully spoken, Eva Dear.
The lines you singled-out are among my favorites, too … the most unusual in imagery of them all, I think.
Isn't that just a gorgeous picture Light selected, and I agree with you on it, too … surprise-surprise! : )
Thank you for reading this lovely, warming little cowrite, and for your blessing of praise.

I am so very pleased you fully imagined it … most grateful hugs! ⁓ Richard ; )

[Rebecca J Martin]

Truly beautiful!! I felt every word!

[Richard🖌]

Thank you, Dear Rebecca 🌼
Welcome to the Café … I hope you will stay and make many new friends, gain many fans, and attract a loyal, admiring following.
Your praise and expressed sensation of feeling for this warm little piece are truly gratifying to a bard's hope of pleasing his readers. : )
I want you to know how very much I appreciate you selecting one of my poems to read and comment on; yet, as merely a humble poet, I am not qualified to review and critique books, though, many here are and will for you far more proficiently than I could.
Review BarleyGirl, she is a remarkably skilled reviewer.

Warmest hug of thanks, Dear Rebecca ⁓ Richard ; )

[Rebecca J Martin]

Thank you!!! I think I may of seen BarleyGirl on here.. I will check her out, thanx for the suggestion!!! Hugs!!!

[Crowley]

A not so easy form of poetry to do but you did a great job. The tone was a wisp of wind with fresh smell of springtime dispersed. Romantic, read like a period piece. Really enjoyed this!

[Richard🖌]

Hey, Poet!
Can't thank you enough for such an exuberant review. I know Light will enjoy your accolades and expressed appreciation as much as I have.

Thanks for reading us, and for your enjoyment … what better gratification for a coupl'a hopeful poets, eh? ⁓ Richard : )

[MsJewel]

This is lovely - the flow of your romantic words, the gorgeous form, the painting...absolutely perfect! You two make an awesome team! :) Julie

[Richard🖌]

Thank you, Dear Julie,
You always treat me so sweetly … muahhh*
I very rarely ever cowrite, but this one was fun and easy to do with a great poetess.

Big hugs, Lovely Poetess! ⁓ Richard ; )

[Annette Pisano-Higley]

Congrats to both of you, Light and Richard, on this stunning collaborative poem with its original (!) intricate form, meter and rhyme.Ricalai Rocks! It just dances and blooms so eloquently and elegantly. Love the classical language and Elizabethan passionate grace. Very Bard-like. Kudos x 2!

[Richard🖌]

Hi, Annette! : )
We both take an humble and grateful bow in the glow of your celebratory accolades and praise.
This was a fun cowrite with a wonderfully-skilled Free Verse poetess who show her amazing stretch of flexibility to co-compose in such a rhyme-laden form, and remarkably, it was her choice.

Thank you, M'Dear, for such an encouraging and gracious review … big hugs! ⁓ Richard