The FLIRT! (sassy fun)

Kaduta … try one, it's fun! 😃 (see instructions in Author's Note)

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Author's Note

"Kaduta"
An original form created by
Richard W. Jenkins © 17 Nov 2006
A Katuda ("Falling" in Italian) is a poem about any topic, composed in a minimum of at least one 6-line verse of 3 Rhyming Couplets, but no limit to number of verses.
Alignment: Author’s Choice
Syllable Counts Per Line: 2/2/2/2/9 (5-4)/9 (5-4)
Rhyme Scheme: aa, bb, c-c, c-c
(for additional verses, use: dd, ee, f-f, f-f etc)

Illustration: Bus Stop Pin Up Beauty © by Baron Gerald Von Lind

Well-meant critique and constructive comments are always welcome! : )

Reviews

[lightsong]

perfect name for the form, it read as falling leaves, slowly one by one, two by two... then it is stacked at the end like the leaves under the tree, nice and naughty, a good smile we need sometimes, thank You for sharing both Your form and the sweet little cutie too.

[Richard🖌]

Dear Gh!
A "smile" is the perfect announcement for that which you've spread across this olde bard's mug from the sheer joy contained and glowing from your thoughtfully expressed words of praise, delightful descriptives, and warm embrace they've so sweetly surrounded me with.

I love it!
What's more to say, but you're as welcome as can be, and I thank you equally as much for treating me … a big, happy HUG! ⁓ Richard : )

[Cassie]

Hey richard, your poems always bring me a smile

[Richard🖌]

Ah, Cassie Sweet 😏
And, your reviews always soften my heart.

Thank you, Dearest … here's hoping you're smiling now! ⁓ Richard 🍃

[Lacey Sue]

My family tells me all the time I'm a natural flirt

[Richard🖌]

MMmmm, Hazel 🤒
What a lovely thought … I feel it!

Thanks for the lovely reads 'n reviews, Dear Poetess ⁓ Richard🍃

[Unspoken poet]

This is wonderful and fun, nicely written

[Richard🖌]

Thank you, Kay-T,

For the nice compliments … much appreciated! ⁓ Richard 🍃

[Unspoken poet]

not a problem

[barleygirl]

One of the most playful pieces I’ve seen from you, altho it’s been a long time since I read you. I clicked on this one becuz I was hoping to get a read that’s more upbeat & fun. Every word is well-crafted for wordplay & meaning. This is exactly the kind of poem I most enjoy (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Richard🖌]

How wonderful to see ya, Margie! : )
Glad you found one to your liking and enjoyment … that makes writing and sharing so much more fun and rewarding.

Hugs back atcha, 'n big smiles, too! ⁓ Richard : D

[Chris Shaw]

A saucy little number you have cooked up here Richard. Delightful little read and the flirty image looks just like Liz taylor to me in her younger days. Hope all is good with you.

Chris

[Richard🖌]

Greetings, Chris! : )
Thanks for the great review.
Hey, she does sorta favor a young Liz Taylor, and how pretty she is, eh? Wish I was that talented an artist.
All is wonderful with me, Dear Poetess, and I sincerely hope the very same to You … hugs! ⁓ Richard ; )

[Madeira]

A wonderful cheeky rhyme which painted a picture in my mind of the subject, loved this!

[Richard🖌]

Hi, Madeira Sweet!
How I ever missed you charing review I do not know.
It so pleases that you joined my mind in the picture and the rhyme, and that you "loved" it is like a cherry on top.

Thank you dearly, Lady-Poet … big hug! ⁓ Richard ; )

[Kelly Scheppers]

I love the garter and the stockings just as much as I love the form of this. A little sass is a good attribute, don't you think?

[Richard🖌]

If/when applied to You, absolutely! ; )

Thanks, Kelly✨ ⁓ Richard

[Susan 🦋]

Since you thought I should try this form...here it is! LOL part 2 of your little flirty piece!

Red drinks
Two clinks
That gaze
Ablaze!
Sensation's engross, come hold me close,
till lover's repose... beckons curled toes!

[Richard🖌]

SUSAN!
You never cease to amaze me how you can take any form and make it virtually dance upon the page with your endless stream of poetical creativity.
Your review poem could not have been more perfectly rendered … it is the perfect appendant to my little piece.

I am sooo very humbled and pleased! : )
Thank you, my dear, fine student and lovely lady-poet! ⁓ Richard

[Richard🖌]

Psst! Last line, make it "beckons". ; )

[Susan 🦋]

I have a great teacher :-)

[Richard🖌]

"B L U S H!"

[Susan 🦋]

ughh thanks you..

[Wild Rose]

Like the pin up

who/what was she

she could be anything

[Richard🖌]

Me, too!
Why, "she" was the inspiration for this flirty poem … what else? LOL!

read moreMe, too!
Why, "she" was the inspiration for this flirty poem … what else? LOL!

Thanks for dropping-in for a naughty read! ⁓ Richard ; )

[Einstein Noodle]

ahahahaha what a flirt indeed ...i was captivated and charmed my friend! great read and congrats on the creative form sir!
E.
ps. what a pic!!!! ;)

[Richard🖌]

Thanks a zillion, Dear Gene!
That you'd cotton to that sweet lil' pic … enough to curl a guy's toes! ; )
The accolades and praise from an artist of your caliber truly make my efforts so much more enjoyable and rewarding, My Friend.

Bless you a sunny day! ⁓ Richard : )

[Einstein Noodle]

you are too kind my friend! and thanks for the blessing ..i accept!!!! ;) and right back at ya!