Mockingbird (Nature's glory)

Chaiku … a Chinese influenced Japanese form (see tutorial in Author's Note). Inspired by Cherrie Palmer's poem "Chilled Wine Warm Kiss" http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/Cherrie_Palmer/399760/

Mockingbird

Come sing your songs

lively and free …

each one its own

atop your tree.

You mesmerize

with no repeats;

miracles of

warbling treats.

You mimic pure

voices of all …

birds, insects -- each

wilderness call.

The mockingbird,

God’s lovely gift

to entertain …

our spirits lift.

Rejoice sweet bird

in endless song,

thrilling one’s soul

the whole day long.

Richard W. Jenkins

©2018

Author's Note

"CHAIKU"
A Chaiku is Chinese rhythm in Japanese reserve.
Rhyming is permitted, but is not required.
A verse is 4 lines of 4-syllables each,
no limit to the number of verses.
Topic matter about anything.

Photography: Copyright credits to Ron Dudley.

Well-intended critique and helpful comments are always welcomed. : )

Reviews

[Aura]

The last stanza:
Rejoice sweet bird
in endless song,
thrilling one’s soul
the whole day long. Sounds so enchanting. Bird tweets are the most peaceful sounds of nature, hearing them in the morning when I just wake up makes me feel good, its a sign of spring and summer because in fall and winter we don't hear them.

[Richard🖌]

So beautifully spoken, Aura Dear,

Your poetic voice sings ever-so brightly unto my heart's grateful ears.

Bless you and hug you with warmest thanks galore! ⁓ Richard🖌

[Aura]

You are most welcome!

[barleygirl]

I love messages about the natural beauty found in creatures & you've tuned this one like a set of guitar strings. Not familiar with this particular bird, but your word painting helps a reader feel as if it's right out there, doing its thing, enjoying being observed in your poem. Great word crafting! Fondly, Margie

[Richard🖌]

Hi, Margie! : )
How wonderful to see you this fine day.
What a lovely brag you gave me on this informative composition about my little feathered friend.
There are several species of mockingbird around the globe, and the picture in this one is the kind here in Texas … in fact, it is our Texas state bird.

I am so happy you read and enjoyed this poem; your words have graciously and warmly blessed me … hugs! ⁓ Richard : )

[kitty]

Our 'feathered friends', delicate, carefree, a delight to you, to me. In the air so pure, so clear with much joy without fear. A delight to read! Thank you.

[Richard🖌]

Hi, Lady Kitty!
It is a lovely day to hear from you, and to receive the joy of your comments on this humble aviary piece, in homage to one of my favorite little friends.

Your review, a beautiful poem in itself, embraces so warmly … hugs to you, Dear Lady-Poet! ⁓ Richard : )

[kitty]

From a distance I see, I observe my feathered 'friends' undisturbed by my presence... a bird watchers privelidge! Hugs are always most welcome.

[kitty]

Oh I forgot to say that the Humming Bird is another joy to see!

[Richard🖌]

Indeed, it is!

[kitty]

Having trouble with feedback on another.

[Richard🖌]

What do you mean?

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you for advising us on the Chaiku Richard. The images you have posted with your poetry are superb. I love birds but don't know much about the Mockingbird at all. It is not a native of where I reside. However I have learned from your wonderful tribute to this little creature that is can mimic others. All bird song lifts my spirits. I am left thinking what an incredibly clever little thing it is. Thank you for sharing your eloquent and beautiful poetry.

[Richard🖌]

Hi, Chris! : )
How wonderful to introduce you to this interesting little form … I am so pleased you find favor with the pictures of this enthralling bird, too.
The lifespan of the mockingbird averages 8-years, during which it continuously learns sounds of the environment around it, including other birds species, dogs, cats, insects (such as the bullfrog and katydid),even the human voice. I once heard on high in my walnut tree singing, "here kitty-kity" over and over, and it's d=said they will mimic car alarms and motorcycles, as-well, etc. I listened one night in the fall (their mating season) to a mockingbird outside my window sing for over an hour without one repeat … it's estimated they can learn in excess of 200 sounds.
The northern mockingbird (North America) is recognized as the most prolific songster of the various species, and is my state's bird (Texas).
Most all birds' voices lift my spirits, too, except the crow and the buzzard … LOL!

It is a pleasurable honor to share my poetry with you … thanks, Chris! ⁓ Richard : )

[Chris Shaw]

Thank you Richard for telling me more about the mockingbird.

[Richard🖌]

Sharing can be fun and interesting, Chris … ya think?

[Dara]

A wonderful tribute to a lovely bird, one of my favorites after making a trip to Australia. Their chirp, if you will, is so very distinctive and full of character. I once had a friend who lived near Perth and we would chat and the birds would be singing in the background. Such beautiful words and flawless form. This will be a keeper for me.

[Richard🖌]

Many grateful thanks, Dear Dara,
How happy it makes me feel to please a fine, kindhearted, and lovely poetess with one of my humble little efforts.
Your shared experience with this amazing bird, your accolades, and expressed appreciation combine to gratify and reward an olde bard for his earnest labors.

It is a joy to write for you, Dara … please, come again … happy hugs! ⁓ Richard : )

[Govind singh]

Wow such a lovely piece..loved it..

[Richard🖌]

Thanks for reading and complimenting this piece, and for sharing your feeling.

[Kelly Scheppers]

...gorgeous birds! I have nesting mourning doves just outside my window. They (birds) are fascinating creatures to watch. Your poem is such a lovely lament to them, Richard.

I like the new avatar!

[Richard🖌]

Ohhh,
The softly cooing, gentle voice of the mourning dove … how it soothes a tumultuous soul.
Of all God's creatures, wild birds (for me) are the most emblematic of freedom and joy.
Yours should birth two sweet, tender chicks.

How it so pleases me you take to my avatar, too … big hug of thanks to you, Kelly ⁓ Richard : )

[Dave]

Richard I've been away for a little while and I come back to be greeted with this
beautiful poem. In my mind, I can hear the mockingbirds' song. Thank you.

Take care - Dave

[Richard🖌]

Hi, Dave!
I am so glad you're again here amongst your fans and peers, My Friend.
Yes, the mocking's song has a way of remaining long after it has flown.

Bless and keep thee well … thank you! ⁓ Richard : )

[Delmar Cooper]

I enjoyed the simplicity of this. I don't know if that has anything to do with this from or not. I watch mockingbirds around here and admire them, nothing wimpy about a mockingbird.

[Richard🖌]

Thank you most gratefully, Delmar, for your kind accolades and appreciative words in review.
I do think the Chaiku form lends to simplicity of expression, and makes a nice enjoyment for those who favor it.
I could not agree more, My Friend … I saw a mockingbird handily ward-off an aggressive bluejay the other day, and that's not an easy task.

Blessings all your days! ⁓ Richard : )

[Angelheart1]

A tender, sweetly worded poem. As always its nice to read your words here, but have missed your special words which would “thrill my soul all day long”. Angel

[Richard🖌]

Brightest welcome, Angel,
A big thank you for sharing your highly prized praise and warmly expressed appreciation for this little poetic effort.

Your own words are quite thrilling in their own way … hugs to you! ⁓ Richard : )

[Susan 🦋]

This is wonderful! Chaiku?? never heard of it.. ( shocker huh ;-).. hmmmm I have some ideas floating around. :-) anyways, feel good litttle poem. Puts the Mockingbird in my mind, soft mimic songs soothing the soul... yep, a sweet little smile-maker poem.

[Richard🖌]

Thank you, Dear Susan,
Your confession of an inspiration is encouraging, indeed! No telling the beautiful Chaiku that will produce, but I can barely wait. : )

Your review is quite smile-making and "feel good" in itself … big, happy hugs! ⁓ Richard