LIFE'S SWEET MUSIC (let's sway 'n play)

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Author's Note

One dusted-off from the archives …

"QUICKIE"
(Doubledown Style 2, or Fours 'n Sixes)
Original form created by
Richard W. Jenkins
© 19 Apr 1987

Any number of 6-line verses about anything:
Aligned left or center.

Syllable count per verse:
4/4/6/4/4/6

Rhyme scheme:
xxxa
xxxa
xxxxxb
xxxc
xxxc
xxxxxb

xxxd
xxxd
xxxxxe
xxxf
xxxf
xxxxxe

Etc...

Please, feel free to offer well-meant, constructive critique! : )

Reviews

[barleygirl]

Well written with a strong sense of rhythm & lyrical sway. This might be the peppiest poem I've ever read from you & I'm glad I found it becuz it gives me an expanded viewpoint of all your talent & tendencies! Thanks for putting a little toe-tapping upon our hearts (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Richard🖌]

Good afternoon, Margie 🎸

How surprising you've come across this little toe-tapper… it's buried so far down my list, and from your reaction, I am so happy you did. ; )
I, too, find reading your poetry quite revealing of your various temperaments, bents, and creative skills. I've never tired of your seemingly endless facets … you're a very interesting and inspiring person, to say the least.

It is a lovely pleasure to share something you seem to enjoy so much … with hugs 'n warmest blessings of thanks, Dear Margie ⁓ Richard🍃

[Sophie]

Music to sing and dance to underneath the stars :) lovely

[Richard🖌]

Hi, Sophie! : )
Welcome to my pages ; it is so very nice of you to drop-in for a read and to sweeten the atmosphere with your poetic words of review for this lively little piece.

Your praise and lovely expressions of enjoyment gift a happy smile … thank you ever-so warmly, Lady-Poet! ⁓ Richard

[J. J. Nightingale]

Music is a JOY ... I love dancing ..letting go..
Of course you know I am not a fan of any style !

...but this has rhythm !! .. and spirit !!!

I did enjoy !

Jazzy

[Richard🖌]

Thank you, dear Jasmine! : )
I'll bet you really are a marvelous dancer, when you "let go" and enjoy it to its fullest … shall we?

Yes, M'Lady, by now you've told me so much (LOL!), I know you're not a fan of "any" style, but that's alright with me, as long as you enjoy it, and this one I thought you might … for its "rhythm and spirit", if for no other reason.

Your enjoyment is my own … you gift me the warmest, brightest smile!
Hugs to You, and thanks again, Jasmine ⁓ Richard

[J. J. Nightingale]

You are welcome Sir...and the image is a perfect choice !

[J. J. Nightingale]

I don't get the aa bb cc stuff..............

[Richard🖌]

Rhyme scheme (x's represent the number of unrhymed words in a line and the lowercase letters represent the words at the end of the line that rhyme the same):
xxxa (line 1 is identified with an "a")
xxxa (line 2 is identified with an "a" indicating these two "a" lines rhyme with each other in their end words)
xxxxxb (line 3 is identified with a "b")
xxxc (line 4 is identified with a "c")
xxxc (line 5 is identified with a "c" indicating these two "c" lines rhyme with each other with a different rhyme than lines "a" or "b" in their end words)
xxxxxb (line 6 is identified with a "b" indicating these two "b" lines rhyme with each other in their end words with a different rhyme than lines indicated as "a" and "c")

It is the international language used in poetry rules to guide the poet writing in a particular form, much as music has its own language.
I hope this helps clarify the system, Dear Jasmine.
If you would like more info, just message … I'll always be happy to chat with you. : )

[J. J. Nightingale]

NOW I AM TOTALLY CONFUSED..............LOL

[J. J. Nightingale]

THANKS......................

[J. J. Nightingale]

Why do they not just say rhyme the first and third..or rhyme the first and last...........grrrrrrrrrrr

[J. J. Nightingale]

and now we also have have a syllable count..Good Lord..I'm out.........................>>>

[Richard🖌]

Ah … well, we tired, eh?
Smiles to ya, Lady Jasmine! : D

[J. J. Nightingale]

You did.....thanks.....................:)..........

[Richard🖌]

Of course!
In every verse, make lines 1 & 2 and lines 4 & 5, 4-syllables long, and lines 3 & 6, 6-syllables long.
In addition in every verse, make line 1 rhyme with line 2, make line 4 rhyme with line 5, and make line 3 rhyme with line 6 … WALLA!
Much easier, eh?

[J. J. Nightingale]

That is a bit easier to understand..... yes

[Richard🖌]

I love it when understand together. ; )

[J. J. Nightingale]

Me too........................................