A quandary of bygones ⁓ (kismet)

Ballad

Author's Note

From the archives.

All constructive critique is welcome! : )

Reviews

[Cryingkate]

Whom Spoketh word and say it so,
" love separeth with passing time?"
"Thou Divine" sayeth "know"

What thou soweth on earth,
"Thou soweth in Heaven"

"What though thinketh, so shall it be"

:-)
This Poetic Journey was savored and locked away for many future visits, Thank You so much for the Eternal tour:-)

[Richard🖌]

Thank you, Kate! : )
Your review is a wondrous poem within itself … one that shares your knowing and understanding as it was meant to be.
Many blessings of grateful warmth to you, Dear Lady-Poet! ⁓ Richard

[David Scott]

I think this should be the song for every lost love... Remember there was once love, no matter how cold the heart has become.
Soft and plaintive tone. A gentle soul wrote this fine work of art.

[annalysiar]

Its a beautiful poem so soft and dreamlike... Its a wonderful poem

[Richard🖌]

Thank you, My Friend, for stopping by for a read and for your comments and encouraging praise.
A most blessed Thanksgiving to you! ⁓ Richard

[annalysiar]

And a wonderfully blessed thanksgiving to you as well friend. You are more than welcome

[Linda Marie Van Tassell]

This poem makes me think of snow at first dawning's light, when the sun shines brightly, the thaw begins, droplets fall from the roof, and water drips to the lawn. There is warmth to your words and a hope in between. In its entirety, it is beautiful. Its pieces refractions of light. Well penned!

[Richard🖌]

Bless, you, Dear Lady Linda, for such warming joy and praise the sweetness in your words flows through my appreciative, inspired heart.
You have made an olde bard's work feel worthy of his sharing, and what higher gratification could he hope for than this?
The very imagery of your review sweeps my senses away into a beautiful place I'd love to be … for You and your wondrous touch, I most graciously and gratefully thank you, Dear Linda! ⁓ Richard

[jacob erin-cilberto]

as cold as the winters get in our lives....spring comes again, and love and warmth can be restored...

and it will...

j.

[Richard🖌]

Thank you, Jacob, for another of your always interesting and rewarding visits to one of my verses, and how true your words resonate in my hopeful heart, My Friend.
Many blessings to you! ⁓ Richard

[J. J. Nightingale]

Very beautiful..... many words I do not know
But that is on me....

I love Ballads.. and this is special...

Jazz

[Richard🖌]

I thank you ever-so warmly and gratefully, Jasmine, for your time taken to read and comment on this sad poem of fate (kismet), and certainly your praise assures me my efforts to write and share with those whom might be touched, has not been wasted.

I enjoy writing the Ballad, and I thank you for believing this one is "special"! ⁓ Richard

[J. J. Nightingale]

You are welcome...........................:)

[Richard🖌]

🍀 ✨⭐ ☺ ⭐✨ 🍀

[J. J. Nightingale]

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