Speak to Me ⁓ (enticingly warm)

Rhyming Couplets in Iambic Pentameter

Oh, speak to me in words that stoke my fires,
those aches inside no other’s voice inspires.

In moments clear, with words I understand;
embrace me in hot rhythms un-preplanned.

Yes, speak to me in ways I’ve never known;
sweet senses high, all of your passions grown.

Then, show me what it’s like, I’m so adored …
there is no place your lips have not explored.

Come soft, caress my cheek and whisper low;
then, hold me warm and close that I will know,

there is no one or place for me on Earth
who touches deeper or with greater mirth,

those special spots I know no other can …
it’s in this way I’ll always ~ be your man.

Richard W. Jenkins
            ©2015

 "Silver Winner" Erotica Writing Contest

Author's Note

A critical review is appreciated and always welcome. : )

Reviews

[Zenovia]

Oh, speak to me in words that stoke my fires,
those aches inside no other’s voice inspires.

those special spots I know no other can …
it’s in this way I’ll always ~ be your man

your words haunt deep into the places that no one knows of :P

it warms me inside out to read them..

your poetry always find ways to warm others heart.

[Richard🖌]

Such a beautifully warm and heart-touching review, Zenovia, your sweetness has gifted this bless-ed bard … thank you ever-so embracing, dearest poetess!

The lines you've highlighted certainly set aglow the spirit of this poem's essence in a most wondrously sweet way, and to realize that my "words haunt deep into the places that no one knows of", goodness-ME … sighhh!

Warmest hugs of most gracious thanks to thee! ⁓ Richard : )

[Simply Divine Creation]

This I too great Richard, I love it.

[Richard🖌]

Thank you eve so warmly and gratefully, Tobic, for your lovely compliment and for loving anything from me … hugs to you, Dear Poetess! ⁓ Richard

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Form and function fall together in a seductively sensual love story Richard.

[Richard🖌]

Thank you, John, for the comments in recognizing the contents of this piece.

Blessings to you, My Friend! ⁓ Richard

[Annie Gryphon]

Dear Richard, you're the beekeeper! Putting out your little honeypots to attract us poetry-hungry bees. And see how we all come flying, sucking your lovely words. I love your poems so much.

[Richard🖌]

Thank you, Annie, for the beautiful and most thoughtful review.
You do know how to make a bard feel appreciated! ⁓ Richard

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love the form and rhythm of this piece, Richard... even more do I love the sentiments within: speak to me and show me as only you can... how wonderful it is to know such love... beautiful poetry, my friend

[Richard🖌]

Thank you, Thomas, for reading and enjoying this romantically sensual little piece.

Blessings! ⁓ Richard

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i like the idea of getting touched deeply, yet with mirth...the poem caresses that sensual side of us...and so well done with the couplets and iambic beat.

j.

[Richard🖌]

Thank you so very much, Jacob, for such understanding recognition of the poetical acumen of this piece, and for the truly encouraging praise and enjoyable comment.

Bless you, My Fine Friend! ⁓ Richard

[Kelly Scheppers]

I have truly melted!
I adore this form, Richard...and I must keep this one in my library for whenever the world seems cold and unforgiving. This will warm me!

Kelly
x

[Richard🖌]

My, Kelly!
Such a visually entreating thought you've implanted into the enjoyable part of my mind … I shall return to this special review time and again.
You've no idea how happy it makes me to think I could serve you so well … or, perhaps you do.

Most gracious thanks … with warmest smiles 'n hugs, Kelly ⁓ Richard