⁓ How you'll know I Love You ⁓ (simple love poem)

English [Shakespearean] Sonnet Doublet

Author's Note

Golden Finches from Wikimedia Commons.

Constructively critical reviews are always welcomed, and appreciated. : )

Reviews

[Ahnjolie McKenna]

Beautifully written, expressing perfectly the continuity of love. Separation by distance or death, it matters not...for love is kept safely within every memory and moment. At our weakest, or even at times of achievement...we need the connection to our love. Unbeknownst to us, as we share our lives with one another...our senses are creating a collection of memories for our hearts...promising that we shall never truly be alone. Our senses are the keepers and dispensers of creativity...to allow for our loves and lives to be eternal, through art, poetry and song. I am impressed, always, by the depth of your words. Thank you for sharing...
Soft smiles for you...
Ahnjolie

[Richard🖌]

Ahhh!
No one interprets and feels my poetry like you do, Dear Ahnjolie … and as much as they honor and gratify my humble efforts, it certainly is not expressed with your level of eloquence and clarity.
Your interpretation of "love" is tangible, almost intuitive in depth of perceptive grasp … it's as though you are imbued by love's essence, or you breath it.
In-any-event, there is no doubt you fully and completely fathom every nuance and facet of these two ethereally romantic sonnets.

As I, too, Ahnjolie, am {obviously} impressed by the depth and grace of your own words … humbly, most gratefully and warmly, I bow with great thanks to Thee! ⁓ Richard

[Lisasview]

This beautiful Sonnet really pulled at my heart strings..
I loved reading it ..I felt a part of it for some reason which just shows what an amazing poet you are fabulous writer!!

Thank you,
Lisa

[Richard🖌]

It is I, Dear Lisa 🍂

Who humbly thanks You for blessing a hopeful bard with such effulgently warming accolades of loving, heartfelt expressions, in sheer poetic loveliness.

Isn't the Sonnet sooo very perfect for romance.😏
With warmest hugs, Dear Lady-Poet! ⁓ Richard🖌

[Lisasview]

Yes, and your choice for the art work is divine!!

[Richard🖌]

Thank you, Lisa,
Ever-so warmly⁓*

[Lisasview]

Oh gosh, I thought by now you would be in dream land..

[Richard🖌]

Oh, I am. ; )

[Cherrie Palmer]

Is there anything more elegant than a sonnet. Beautiful, heartfelt and as I watch it snow this poem of love has powers of warmth.

[Richard🖌]

"Is there anything more elegant than a sonnet?"
Not to me, Cherrie ❄️

Thank you for sharing my pen's romantic heartbeats.
Ohhh-YES! A beautiful love poem can make the coldest day and heart turn toasty. ; )

Thank you ever-so warmly, Cherrie, with a most delightfully snow adorned day to ya … 🎼Silver Bells-Silver Bells🎶 ⁓ Richard 🍃

[Cassie]

Richard, Officially you have the crown of rhyming!! Good one as always

[Richard🖌]

Beautiful Cassie 🌸
How wonderfully you honor me, and how I so love it! ; )
Oh, yes, I've many rhyming poems, and many Free Verse pieces, as-well (click on Writings to the right of my profile pic and the list will pop-up with the name of whatever form each poem is composed in.

Thank you, Dear Lady, for blessing this romantic little piece with such nice compliments, and my heart with the gentle warmth of your touch … warmest smiles! ⁓ Richard 🍃

[Cassie]

Your comment in itself is a poem!!! it feels so good, thank you for making my day

[Betty Hermelee]

This is a beautiful poem about love, separation, grief, emotion, togetherness (even when separated). I like the rhyme and the flow of the poem. Wonderful!!!!

[Richard🖌]

Hi, Betty! : )
Welcome to my pages
How wonderful to receive my first review from you, and such a beautifully inspiring and gratifying it, indeed, is.

Thank you ever-so warmly for for your praise and expressed enjoyment … hugs 'n blessings! ⁓ Richard 🍃

[Richard🖌]

OOPS!
The extra "for" just jumped in there … LOL!

[Rye]

oh WOW!! This is just so beautiful, I really like this write. It's so nicely written.

[Richard🖌]

Oh!
So, you found this one eh? My gently warming homage to love … I am so pleased.
Your compliments are wonderfully lovely.

Thank you, Dear Ryanna … big hugs! ⁓ Richard 🍃

[poetgurl]

I can catch a glance of Romeo and Juliet in your words here, This is a wonderful beautiful write, I enjoyed this write, very poetic. I love the background.

[Richard🖌]

Kimmie,
How beautiful and gratifying your words are, and how deeply touched they've left me feeling, to know you've enjoyed and think so highly of my humble efforts.

Thank you ever-so gratefully for loving anything about it! ⁓ Richard 🍃

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i like the connection between the sonnets...part one and part two so expressive of what real love feels and acts like...
we can always say beautiful words to another...but these words jump off the page with the emotions and hug the reader...
j.

[Richard🖌]

I am ever-so grateful, Syr Jacob 🍂
Your sentiments express so very much of that which I'd hoped would be conveyed unto my readers' own hearts, feelings, and emotions.

How happy it makes an olde bard to be so assured of this by virtue of your graciously generous review … with most thankful blessings, My Friend! ⁓ Richard 🍃

[Sarah K Cass]

Oh my goodness. This brings a lump to my throat the sheer beauty of it!

[Richard🖌]

Thank you, Sarah,
It is encouraging you felt that and think it's beautiful! ⁓ Richard 🍃

[Robert Trakofler]

thank you i didn't realize i could copy and past from the image otherwise i wouldn't of bothered you! Still haven't attempted a sonnet perhaps i will muster the courage soon. I could hear a bards voice in this with a very natural cadence and flow in its unfolding, a warm breath upon my mind (love that line) as I read the rawness of the emotion laid bare in its sincerity at first read made me recoil a bit in the shame of a prying witness. The second sonnet is a warm familiar reminder of the very things I strongly believe in myself and you conducted it so well and i need not expound on it a bit for i see you in it so plainly we have very similar beliefs. A very fine write good sir

[Richard🖌]

Not a bit of bother, Robert,
I am always glad to help a friend out. : )
Oh-boy! How I'd love to teach you the Sonnet … with your natural knack for rhythm and beat, you'd master it in not time. I mean this, too … just let me know; anytime.
I must commend you on such a beautiful review for this little pair of sonnets.
Your descriptive words of praise, appreciation, relatability, and understanding, read like poetic prose, leaving me with a sense of humble gratification and encouragement.

Thank you ever-so much, My Friend! ⁓ Richard 🍃

[Robert Trakofler]

drat bigger font for blind bunnies please

[Richard🖌]

My apology, Sir,
For your convenience, I will to message it to you, and would appreciate any comments in review you might wish to offer in this space, so I can properly respond.

Thank you sincerely for selecting this simple verse, composed in homage to the spirit of love! ⁓ Richard 🍃