m i n d s c a p e (abstract)

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Author's Note

Constructively critical reviews are always welcome and appreciated. : )

A…b i t…o f…m y…a b s t r a c t…s i d e…g o t…a…g r i p…o n…m e. . .e r r r !

Reviews

[lightsong]

I...d o...n o t...r e m e m b e r...r e a d i n g...t h i s. . . e r r r ! : >

Of course that monster, time is never affected by TIME! it only play on us and within us, so first and best let us threw that T I M E... into that a b s t r a c t…s i d e. the mark will be left on our subconscious mind and many times we don't know this until some great event happens. yet I see this like a wound left after a fighting, now it is settled down and the search to find the lesson and truth of this wound begins... well My abstract side can be more awkward than yours so better not to keep "abstracting" in my review 🙃

[Richard🖌]

LOL!

Always, from You, Dear Astute Ghounwah, there is a wonderfully intelligent, insightful, and entertainingly depth-filled surprise.
I adore your own skill at "abstract" writing … you learn so quickly and so very well.🙃
Your discernments on this rather ambiguous piece is equally as interesting and remarkable; for, they are so uncannily close to my very own thoughts … it's almost as though you know me so well, you're with me inside my skin.

What an interesting thought, eh?
Thank you ever-so warmly, Beautiful Poetess! ⁓ Richard🖌

[~]

A caravan of thoughts of costly silk you've brought before us. To me this has the Ecclesiastics style. I like the great metaphor and the intriguing pondering.

out of the box for sure :D

[Richard🖌]

It's gotten so I find myself checking first thing to see if you've been around on my page, and the smile when it's discovered you have dances all through like fireflies on a quiet Spring night.
I so appreciate you, Skittles … warmest, most grateful hugs! ⁓ Richard

[Sheryl]

I Like it, Great brevity and you even did it in rhyme! WoW, what a statement,
nowthatissomethingtolookintomyfriend!! ") LOve, ya Sherrill

[Richard🖌]

Oh, Sherrill,
You always make my efforts feel so worthy and appreciated, not to mention how very much I adore and enjoy you … blessings and warmest hugs of huge thanks! ⁓ Richard

[Sheryl]

I feel humbled by your warm appreciation of my review, thank You :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

The Kraken Wakes! This is a trip to my youth. This is a profound piece that feels dark and painful to the protagonist to recall the pain endured. Perhaps line three '..rests in the back of...'?

[Richard🖌]

I thoroughly enjoy insightful reviews that reveal something of the reviewer, too, and yours often say as much about you as my poems do about me, if that makes any sense.
Whatever, I am ever-so grateful to you for taking my humble efforts in and leaving your little gifts … thank you, My Friend! ⁓ Richard

[Kelly Scheppers]

...good poetry for thought on this fine Sunday morning. I must drink another cup of coffee and contemplate more!

[Richard🖌]

So sweet of you, Kelly, to skip along and trip over this bit of my "bump-in-the-road" conceptual side.
You've inspired me to brew another hot mug of lapsang … thank you, Lovely Lady! ⁓ Richard