Secret Rendezvous ⁓ (lil' bit naughty)

Quickie Form

 

                              You smile at me                 

   I smile at thee 

  and all the air's a'fire. 

                      You touch me there

 I do declare,

       "Such bliss you so inspire!

                  What shall we do

 I'm asking you

 is there a place to go?

                   Secrets we'll share

          while we're in there ...

     and no one else will know."

  

Richard W. Jenkins

©2015

  

"Quickie"

My own form … try one, you'll like it!  ; )

© 19 Apr 1987

Verses (unlimited) any topic:

2 minimum, 6 lines each

Verse Count:

4/4/6/4/4/6

Rhyme scheme:

xxxa

xxxa

xxxxxb

xxxc

xxxc

xxxxxb

xxxd

xxxd

xxxxxe

xxxf

xxxf

xxxxxxe

Alignment

Author's choice

Reviews

[Poetic Beauty]

Oh I’ve had those moments. The secret touches and meetings. Those electric moments of touching. Cobalt fire and secret desires.

There is something thrilling about a secret meeting. Where the world has no idea of the lovers embracing.

The flow of this is sweet, and delicate yet the words are fiery in meaning

[Richard🖌]

Now, Lady PB 🍑

How did I guess you'd know all about this one before I even read your review … hmmm? 🤔
Impulsively, scintillatingly stimulating, irresistible, adventurous sex seems an apt descriptive, but I feel somewhat confident you have a better one.
Sharing my sensually blessed poems has never been more enjoyable than with You.

Thank you, PB, for your keenly expressed delight! ⁓ Richard🖌

[Poetic Beauty]

You poems are beautiful and worded is a way that flows like a chiffon dress. Delicate and airy light to the touch.

[~]

Tasting things under the fidelity of secrecy. This looked like fun, and I tried a verse :D

we met, we shared,
we touched, and stared.
my skin, my voice, my sighs
no resentment
yes contentment
your sin, your choice, your comprise.

:D thank you for inventing new ways to change the heart rhythm :D :D

[Annie Gryphon]

Dear Richard, your creativity must be a gigantic river. Mekong and Mississippi are nothing in comparison!

[Richard🖌]

Goodness, Annie!
From all your praise, I'm going to have to make a trip to the drugstore for some Metrecal Shampoo to make my hat fit, but I dearly love it … LOL!
Thank you, Sweetheart … big hugs! ⁓ Richard

[....................]

Love this little write, Richard... who hasn't wanted a secret rendezvous? Enjoyed the form as well.

[Richard🖌]

Thank you, Thomas, for sharing the fun, and for the very nice compliment, as-well, My Friend! ⁓ Richard

[Sheryl]

I love this form, it has such a wonderful cadence to it:)

Your poem is risque, but I found it to be soooooo cute and yes a tad naughty!
Your vivid imagery leaves a very defined image in my minds eye, your writing
to perfection as I have come to know.

You have inspired me to write in this form again, thank You for sharing, LOve, Sherrill













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[Richard🖌]

Hi, Sheryl!
How happy I am you came along to enjoy this sweet little piece with me, and to receive your gratifying and encouraging compliments.
I know I'll love your version of this easy, fun form; you are so welcome, M'Lady, and I thank you, too … hugs! ⁓ Richard

[Sheryl]

Please excuse my long absence, Yes I loved this and will try to replicate
your form again:)

[Richard🖌]

I knew you'd be back. ; )