Dreaming

i dreamed a dream that set me free,
it released the pain and the hurt,
it all seemed so real, so sincere,
until I woke up.

It made me realize that reality,
is not much different than a dream,
except that the escape of waking,
is not an option.

The only escape we have is sleep,
Just a temporary interlude,
of sanity and pure thought,
and in a split second,
the alarm is going off,
and reality must be dealt with,
once more

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Reviews

[Captain Rilen]

I like it. I've definitely had similar thoughts on dreaming. I love the part where it says "the escape of waking is not an option". Great work

[Richard Helbert]

thank you very much for your comments and thanks very much for taking the time to read it i appreciate it very much

[Captain Rilen]

No problem, I'll definitely read some more tomorrow.