Secret LoversA Story by Joey BeatonAssignment One - Make Your Own Tragedy 1 - 2 Pages January 13, 2014 “When will you ever teach me to drive?” was the first thing John heard when he
walked through the door. He reflected
briefly on the days when his toddler son, now almost a grown man, would rejoice
and run to greet him every day after work. “Where’s mom, Will?” John asked,
putting aside his things and taking noticing of the mass of dirty dishes strewn
about the room, the result of an eighteen-year-old’s hunger. “She’s at work again,” he replied,
sitting up in his chair and turning off a medieval-aged looking television show
that he had undoubtedly been watching all day. “She left a note,” he added,
motioning to a yellow piece of paper stuck to the room’s mirror. John read the note: it included details about
another shift called in from the hospital, cooking instructions for the dinner
that was in the oven, and that she didn’t know what time she would be home. “Well,” John said, anticipating his
son’s next question, “I suppose now would be as good as time as ever to go
driving. But clean up this mess!” he added quickly to Will, already half way to
the door. John opened his phone and selected
Lillian from his contacts. She worked as
a nurse and had been spending an increasing amount of time at the hospital
lately. She was what they called an
“on-call” employee, but to John it seemed she worked more than he did. “Hey Lil, it’s me,” John said into
his cell phone, “I just saw your note, thank you for making dinner. We both know how much Will loves when I cook”
he joked. “I’m taking him out driving
for a little while, so I’ll see you when I get back. Wish us luck, I love you,” he finished,
closing his phone and returning it to his pocket. As they loaded into the car, John
spoke reminders about seatbelts, mirror checks, seat adjustments, and other
preliminary safety precautions he was sure his son remembered. Admittedly, John
did not feel comfortable wearing his own seat belt. The belt dug in to his neck, and in this old
car it could not be adjusted, so he went without. In his hypocrisy, he always made his son to
wear it. “Safety first,” he would recite.
Will wouldn’t argue, he knew, as long as he got the chance to drive. They had only been out driving once or twice
before, but in truth he noted remarkable progress in his son’s ability. Will jerked out of the driveway, which made
John question what he had just told himself. The ride thereafter was smooth, and
John relaxed. It was time, he thought,
that they try something new. “Take your
next right,” he said to his son. “The highway?” Will asked in a tone
that betrayed both excitement and uncertainty. “Yeah why not, we’ll surprise your
mother at work.” Will took the right and
accelerated to the speed limit. He
merged onto the highway and continued on as if he had done it a hundred times
before. John felt more confident in his
son, as well as a hint of pride in the boy he had raised. A ring went in his pocket and Will looked
over. “Eyes on the road, bud,” John reminded
him. John removed his phone, knowing
already that it was Lily. They had
chosen the same ringtone long ago, the tune of Secret Lovers. It the first song they had danced to together,
and despite the many years of repetition it still brought sweet memories of
youth and love to John each time he heard it. John opened his phone to a new
text message. “Oh,” John spoke
aloud. “Mom got off work early, we can
turn back any time"” he stopped as he looked up and saw the deer in front of
them. John shouted, urging Will to turn,
or break, or do something, and
grabbed for the wheel, veering the car left.
The deer was avoided, though the oncoming car was not. John heard the deafening sound of metal on
metal before darkness took over. As John’s consciousness returned,
the soft squeal of a siren and a slow, steady beep could be heard over light
murmurings. Where was he? The answer was obvious when he opened his
eyes and saw the stretcher in which he laid, lined beside another of the
same. He turned his head left and saw a
paramedic conversing with a man in the front of the ambulance, muttering
something about a driver that could not yet be removed. Beside him, a sheet covered the entirety a
person in the other stretcher. John
starred, refusing for a short while to believe that it might be his son. “Will”
John thought to himself, the weight of the world pressed against him. John laid his head back; his entire body ached. He tried to calm himself and think about what had happened. He remembered had been ejected from the car, the price he paid to sit comfortably. He grimaced at the fact that it may have saved his life. “Lily,” he thought. She would know what to say, he knew. He needed her soft words now more than ever. John reached into his pocket, slowly and deliberately, with his left arm; his right one appeared to be broken. John opened his phone, selected Lillian from his contacts, and waited for the ring. The phone connected, and to his side the familiar sound of Secret Lovers began, muffled beneath the sheet. © 2014 Joey BeatonReviews
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2 Reviews Added on January 13, 2014 Last Updated on January 13, 2014 AuthorJoey BeatonHalifax, Nova Scotia, CanadaAboutI'm a third year university student taking a "Tragedy" English class. I plan to upload stories and maybe some essays I write for the class, as well as some independent things. I highly value input.. more.. |