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so he uses some miralax.

Author's Note

Dear Cafe,

Camus made me want to kill myself!

But I likes it!

yours truly,
ria



Inspiration from Albert Camus.

Reviews

[Muse]

this is so short and sweet, It will be hard to try and repay you with the same kind of review you have blessed me with.

Lets talk about structure. I actually prefer poets that are not afraid to break all the rules. Like art, why color inside of the lines? You cannot create a masterpiece if you don't try to be different and unique. I envy technical writers, don't get me wrong...I really do. They have discipline. But in doing this...I feel they often leave out their own unique sense of self, style and grace. Why not be daring...I hate what is the same...I dislike cliche....zzzzz...this is not cliche!

Humor...that's what you gave the reader...a chuckle. Thank you for that...I am known for my sarcasm on the cafe...so hat's off to you. High scores.

Cobra

[Vria P Crow]

LMAO HAHA Let me begin by saying that you are very observant. I honestly do not like structure at all. My old profile on WritersCafe was Ayra Luccan, I believe. When I was a teenager, I began with Horror, Short Stories, Poetry, and then Art. I apologize since my diverse nature is in its an infancy.

It actually makes me so happy that you hate this kind of poetry because I share the same hostility. These pieces on Ria Benthil are the embodiment of the adult's humor, sarcasm, and child-like humor.

The poetry I have posted on this site is meant as an outlet for my satirical, hostility side. Your reviews have given me the confidence to post more of myself into it. However, I will not be re posting my work from Ayra Luccan's because that would be cheating:P

Furthermore, the poetry on this one is my poor attempt at comedy. My saracasm is better executed through my Artwork. I will be clear, I am not a famous writer. I tend to work backwards...

end of life story,

love,
ria

[quinfinn]

billy joel's "the stranger" would have done nicely here....clever write.

[Vria P Crow]

HAHA I concur! Thank you, Quinfinn :)

[Gobinder Singh Dhindsa]

So Beautiful.......
Well Done...........
Pen On.................

Do u read mine 2 "Why and Who is a Poet?"

If possible then give your reviews..

Regards,
Lucky

[Vria P Crow]

I believe I can do that:D I only ask that you throw me private messages for Read Requests since it is much easier that way:D Thank you! I have many read Requests so it might take me awhile.

Thank you!

[Gobinder Singh Dhindsa]

Welcome