Heartbreak

Just something I thought of on a plane journey home

Cold streets
Empty seats,
A hush decends.


Tears fall
Heart stalls,
A hopeless awakens.

Smile fake,
Heart-break
Time becomes suspended-

Reviews

[Sapientiam]

The emotions portrayed in this poem is absolutely astounding... The rhythm swayed so nicely and easily throughout the lines. Despite this one being about heartbreak, I felt peaceful while reading this. Odd... Anyways, great job!

[Rianna]

Thanks for the review sapiential I enjoyed seeing your perception!

[Sapientiam]

No problem!