"The Couple." By Cadence

"The Couple." By Cadence

A Story by Caden
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I made this story a long time ago, I hope you enjoy it.

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 There once was a couple, Rose and Jackson. They were happy as they were well, this is their story I'm about to tell. Rose a kind very kind girl, but with Jackson

   She was blind to the signs because she was just too kind. Jackson was always considered “sweet” from Rose's perspective but he really liked to toy with her emotions. Then one night when her parents were in a fight, she snuck out the window leaving unnoticed.


Her and Jackson would go on a date, then she'd go home right before her parents awoke. That’s what she expected, but when she got to the forest a bit past redwood street, she looked around but Jackson remained unseen. Little did she know of his evil scheme, what was about to happen. she wouldn’t know that with a knife Jackson silently hid behind the snow as she looked around calling his name. No response from him as she yelled to the distance, she then felt a shiver down her spine like something was off. Right then, Jackson jumped out running at her with a knife! 


Rose screamed in terror as the knife flashed in the light, she thrashed to the side. She expressed her fear with a yell as she tried to run away from Jackson and the knife’s glistening light. She then tripped on her dress, falling to the ground feeling dazed. She heard Jackson’s footsteps running so she immediately got up trying to escape. She was about to start running when he slammed the knife into her back! Over and over repeatedly with a loud crack!


 After that her dead body laid there limp in the snow. Jackson didn’t want anyone to discover her body, therefore he hid the body right under the snow. Three minutes later another girl arrived at the forest, her face red from the cold and painted with disgust as she got ready to complain. "It's thirty degrees and we're having our date here!?" She exclaimed while crossing her arms. “Looks like Jackson found another girl to kill” Rose’s spirit said feeling ill. The sun came out as Jackson 

pulled the girl close to him. 


The girl pushed Jackson off as she saw he was covered in blood. "Another victim is about to die.. I can't watch..” Rose’s spirit said sadly as she was about to turn her head. Jackson and the girl yelled at each other and the girl then punched Jackson in the face. Rose's eyes softened as she smiled and said "Never mind, she wouldn't make the same mistake I did.”

© 2024 Caden


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Caden
"What do you think his motive was?" -Cadence

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Added on October 4, 2024
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Caden
Caden

Indianapolis, IN



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Hello,I'm Cadence but just call me caden. I'm a guy who likes writing poetry, songs, stories, etc. more..

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