Heart Renewed

To become the person you have tried so hard to keep me from becoming has
become my whole life long dream.  There were times when I respected
you, yet now all I have to say is good bye and I told you so.  You have
failed and it hurts to know that doesn't it.  How can I tell you how I
really feel when every time I open my mouth you make me out to be a bad
guy.  Well today my story takes a new turn.  I have broken away never to
return again.  You had your chance and now it is mine.  I will not be
held down by what you once were nor will I let myself sulk in your ever
present shadow, that seems to engulf me wherever I go.  Today I break
free!!  Today there becomes no hold on me that you will have.  :-)

Author's Note

Tell me what I can improve on please!!!!!

Reviews

[paradise]

Amazing it was very well written and I loved every word