My White Crayon

Incredibly cheesy, but I love it.

My White Crayon

They say it's useless,

The White Crayon.

But they do not know.

It brightens everything,

From Pink to Gold.

The darkest of darks

Becomes a light Gray,

Under it's touch.

 

You are My White Crayon.

Brightening everything in my life. 

You are My White Crayon.

Taking the darkness away.

You are My White Crayon.

Beautiful, stunning, perfect.

Reviews

[indieRokker]

Impressively un-cheesy. Maybe just a tad, but it does the trick, nicley done.

Cheers for the read,
indie♥

[Fallacy Pharmacy]

I don't think it's cheesy-I think this poem is very sweet! The idea behind the poem is amazing; I just think that you should extend this a bit more... Overall-very well done :)

[jasmine]

that is cheesy but GREAT!!! its really cute and i like it:D kudos to you