Will I brake beyond repair?

Anger and frustration building up it seemed that the world was coming down on me, it felt as though I was going to explode and I was looking for the release valve.

 

I feel it building up

Pressing down on me

Squeezing my breath out

 

The pressure is mounting

Surging through my body

Reaching braking point

 

How long before it’s over?

How heavy will the casualties be?

Will I brake beyond repair?

 

Who will be there to hold me together?

Who will activate the release valve?

Will it be in time to save me?

Reviews

[Dragon Witch]

So exquisately expressed, one can feel the pressure.
Blessed be

[Jinx's Heart]

The desperation and suspense brought forth by the narrator's voice is so evident and almost audible. It flows very well and the tone is very clear. I think many can relate to this feeling at one point of their life or another. :) I like it.