I live in you

I live in you

A Poem by Rhine Wolf
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another one of my older poems

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I live in you, yet you fear me
I breath your air to live
I eat, I consume, I have love for thee
I play with you, I have so much warmth to give
 
I run to you, I need what is yours
I climb so you can not hide
I jump over your barriers
I slither under your door to find you inside
 
I hurt those you love
I maim you, take parts that I do not need
I kill, for I am a beast
I create pain, it fills my needs
 
I fear nothing
I consume everything
I laugh at your anguish, your suffering, your pain
Come play with me, I have so much warmth to give

© 2008 Rhine Wolf


Author's Note

Rhine Wolf
The beast that is Fire. It is a creature that is in desperate need of more respect. It is a living breathing creature and as such deserves the respect we afford to other living, wild creatures. We need to remember, just like a wild creature, Fire is not to be trusted, it is unpredictable.

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All the elements should be afforded the respect given to the wild ones. This is so beautifully written and of course I love the twist in the mood and pace. Your talent really shows here. Blessed be love


Posted 15 Years Ago


This was so well written i am assuming the beast your speak about it Fire, you have magaed to capture the essence of how it works and thrives, well done and keep writting

Posted 15 Years Ago


WoW! THis is very powerful and show just how talented you are. It drew me in then spit me out again with the stroke of kindness and then the bitter anger. Very great write and excellent read!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Rhine Wolf
Rhine Wolf

Johannesburg, Heathen, South Africa



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