So cold

 

I am so cold.

It is so dark in here

 

So cold and alone

 

There is no more light

None to warm my soul

 

So cold and alone

 

There is no more love

None to fill my heart

 

So cold and alone

 

There is no more life

None to fill the void

 

So cold and alone

 

There is no more you

None to be my world

 

So, cold and alone I will die.

Author's Note

This is how I would feel if I was to lose the love of my life.

Reviews

[D Poet K]

from reading my poems, im sure you know i'd feel the exact same way if it was to happen to me. this was a good poem, simple, yet good and emotion felt.

[closed account]

such a sad poem, I think that we all can relate to the emptyness in our soul at times.

[Nate (Yanno)]

I think I would feel the same exact way if I lost the love of my life. Depicting someone's own feelings with words is hard to do let alone have people relate to it, but you pulled it off nicely.

[phantom]

Wow! very descriptive. I think some people would feel this way too.

[Dawn]

i would also feel like this if I lost my hubby. I think you express your feelings really well here, this poem flows really well.
Take care of all you love, after all they are the most important things.
Thanks for the review of Beneath the Magic, I am working on life is a dream for a compitition, so at the moment not got much time to get more written on that.
Dawn

[Kaelani]

Wow this is a really deep poem. I like it alot. The ending was surprising to me but it made the poem better.