Elders Acclaim

Elders Acclaim

A Poem by Rhiannon Dragonraine
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written for an eldering ceremony to honor those who give of themselves in leadership.

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Walking in Wisdom,
Sitting in Silence
Listening to the whispered inner voice,
Like Sages of Old
They have made the choice
Moving forward
Sharing knowledge and secrets untold
 
Through hardships and trial
The Elders have come
Lives dedicated to Spirit
They live
Passing on what they can
Knowing that it is the greatest gift
They can give
 
In Darkness and in Light
Searching for the souls delight
They Gather and celebrate beneath the moon
As with nature they commune
 
The self that was has passed away
They have followed nature’s way
Here they stand on the threshold
Nature’s laws and cycles they will uphold
 
Through death and rebirth
They have attuned to the Earth
Teaching and listening
As the fire burns in the hearth
 
No honor do they seek, no recognition or fame
Yet we gather here tonight
With the Gods in sight
For dedication and generosity should be rewarded
We offer up our acclaim
And asked that they be blessed.
 
From Magician to King
From Magician to Queen
Their destiny is of their making
Moving between the worlds unseen
Tonight they step into their new role

© 2008 Rhiannon Dragonraine


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I like it. Society focuses on youth and beauty and overlooks the stored up wisdom of the elderly. This is a mistake. Perhaps age does not make everyone wise and not all elderly folk have the capacity to apply their wisdom, but when you are closer to death and fame and wealth perhaps mean less, then maybe your thinking is less self-centred. Also with more elderly people around it seems sensible for them to be valued as, with luck, we will be elderly one day, too, as if we are not...

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Outstanding write, we are all inter woven in this thing called life. I love it.

Posted 15 Years Ago


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As an elder myself. I found this piece so beautifully written. You have captured the thoughts of so many of our elderly family members. Leaving a part of themselves to be past on and on.

Thanks for sharing.

Author: Nancy Lee Shrader

Posted 15 Years Ago


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I do not know when you wrote this, as I have been remiss in my RRs lately. It does bring to my mind, such a solemn, yet enchanted gathering. One I could envision within my own wood here behind my home, beneath a full moon, perhaps a Winter Solstice moon, shining and reflecting off newly fallen snow. There is a serenity and a peace to be found in this peace, regardless of who one might be, or where one might come from. For nature moves in circles, in cycles, and there is an unending lesson to be found there, that all things come, all things pass - and that all things work together, to connect that circle.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like it. Society focuses on youth and beauty and overlooks the stored up wisdom of the elderly. This is a mistake. Perhaps age does not make everyone wise and not all elderly folk have the capacity to apply their wisdom, but when you are closer to death and fame and wealth perhaps mean less, then maybe your thinking is less self-centred. Also with more elderly people around it seems sensible for them to be valued as, with luck, we will be elderly one day, too, as if we are not...

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Rhiannon Dragonraine
Rhiannon Dragonraine

Waynesville, MO



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I am a person who is on a journey to discover who and what they are. Everyday brings new surprises and ideas and I love that about life; the constant change used to scare me but now I am moving beyon.. more..

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