Love? I beg to differ

Please don't make me feel this

Seems like the wind will change today

A new destination in the month of May

Beginning with the small petals of a beautiful flower

Alas! I hope my resistance won’t falter

 

Please, oh please, don’t ever come this way

My heart will throb and go crazy

I won’t handle my head if it goes hazy

 Don’t let the butterflies flutter in disarray

 

I told myself, I will never fall

Survive your challenge; I’ve been through it all

Yet, what’s with this rebel inside?

It wants me to think again and decide

 

No! I plead, love isn’t something for me

I might not be able to break free

I’ve hated puzzling things to begin with

Please leave me the leisure to breathe.

Author's Note

Another random write! This is something I thought of while I was having lunch on Mcdo.
My first draft was written on a receipt (: Which I wasn't able to finish. Any suggestions are fine. This is still in free verse despite the rhyme so I'm so sorry about that. Anyways, read at your own leisure

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Reviews

[Katherine Enma Pineappl..]

Aho, so that's what took you so long o.e

But that aside you seem to have grown a lot. Well at least its apparent in this poem. Needless to say it was an enjoyable read though I have to comment that the font size is a tad bit large... or not

Ehem... ano iyan ha? Kaw talaga :3

[Rhianne Ney]

Hahah, wala lang eto iyong sinulat ko sa blue notebook yung tinanong mo last time (:

[Katherine Enma Pineapple]

oho~ I see... I was waiting forever alone in the LA room T^T

[Rhianne Ney]

Haha, sorry ha (:P

[Talkless]

Epic i most say

[Rhianne Ney]

Thanks for the review (:

[RachelReaper]

I love the conflicting feelings in this.

[Rhianne Ney]

Thanks (: just thought it up, I don't really feel it

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Wow, something great happens here. I love the powerful piece like this, I admired the classic feel and the words progression is stunning. Keep writing Kabayan you have a great future ahead.

[Rhianne Ney]

Thanks and yeah, I'll keep writing. I'll die if I don't write

[Lil Guppy]

Receipts can always come in handy! ;)
Love is pleasant yet it can also be messy.

[Rhianne Ney]

That's right that's how I interpret it also (:

[Patricia B. Hepler]

'Random words' will reveal the soul and poetry of the mind...
I like the way you followed your thoughts and wrote them down on the only paper you had at that time: a receipt.
~pat

[Rhianne Ney]

thanks and yeah, I was pretty desperate to get it all down in the receipt but I wasn't able to complete the poem

[Abdul Batin Osman Bey]

Cool, like the pace and insight

[Rhianne Ney]

thanks for dropping by (:

[gabrielle]

Ah, to be inlove... we may want to suppress it but it shall come no matter how stubborn the mind. This piece just made me smile.

[Rhianne Ney]

Thanks for reading (*: and yeah, even if we're stubborn it will still come eventually (:

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

reading that your first draft was on a receipt made me smile and remember when I used to do things like that. A lovely poem.

[Rhianne Ney]

Thanks for the kind and lovely review and for kindly stopping by (:

[Writer #00]

I just noticed the read requests letter-tab a couple of minutes and this poem was next in line.

Nice poem! The rhyming was great, I admire poetry that rhymes and still makes sense (I can never pull poetry like that off). The last line is great closure, giving the reader (at least me) the dual-feeling of being suffocated by this love and being relieved as I exhaled, watching it from a distance. Well done.

*O*/100

[Rhianne Ney]

Thanks for stopping by and reading, Dude (:

[Writer #00]

You are welcome.

[Rhianne Ney]

Whoa, you're online?

[Pax]

aha! seems like you had found your muse in Mcdo... :D the poem talks about your inner feelings... not to love or to love... alin ba sa dalawa... a moment in the blues that speaks so much of what you really yearn for... understand what you wrote and you'll know the real answer that lies within you... Great work kabayan!

[Rhianne Ney]

Salamat po sa review and no, wala po akong nakitang muse sa Mcdo, naisip ko lang po habang kumakain kami (:

[Pax]

hmm... muse can be anything kabayan... not just anyone... maybe the moment was on the right time... can be the sorroundings.... anything... and your most welcome...

[Rhianne Ney]

Ah, ganon po ba akala ko pa kasi yung guy (: Salamat ulit po for stopping by