A beautiful piece. I always like poems about oneself because before anyone else, we should know ourselves.
I only have few suggestions here. You have the rhyming aabb from the first up to the fourth stanza. But I found out that you broke it in the last one with abac format.
I think it would be better if:
"I put my thoughts on paper,
I am my world's designer,
With this, they will always reminisce
That someone like me exists."
Your poem is both interesting and funny. I think it might be even better if your last two lines of the last verse ended with rhyming words, in harmony with the previous verses. Either way it's an enjoyable poem.
this is amazing! It has amazing description! I love it so much! All the rhymes go really well! I sing in a shower too! Its a bad habit but oh well! And I agree wih the third paragraph! I do that too! If only I could have a real sword...
Indeed a very fine poem,the kind of idea that makes you think..that`s true, why didn`t I think of that ? -a poem with dry humour mixed with self reflecting introspection and serious thoughts, a excellent piece of literature.
Not lame at all to be self and have fun. A sight God is happy to see, I'm sure. An excellent expression of how some of us are when no one is looking, except HIM.
Baguio City, the city of cold temperature, Philippines
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