Words that remain unspoken

something I came up while I was waiting for my sis

I sneaked out from the hospital to see you,
This is the fourth time and maybe the last time
I know how happy you are now,
I'm glad that you moved on.

You already cleared your head of me,
Now you're holding hands with another,
I'm happy to see your genuine smile once again,
I'm glad that you moved on.

I have to let you go, I hope you understand
I don't have much time left,
So would you please...
Continue smiling for me?

Author's Note

it's not my feelings... I just wrote it...

Reviews

[Emma Lee-Riviera]

D: So tragic sounding... It makes me think of a girl just standing out in the rain, watching her ex run around with a new girlfriend, all smiley and giggly and stuff... And she's doing her best to be happy for them... *sniffle* This is so powerfully written...Well done. *respectful applause*

[Rhianne Ney]

Hey there, emma, thanks a lot for reviewing. Are you still okay with Giotto? *laughs

[Emma Lee-Riviera]

Ahaha yeah. ;)

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

There's a lot of emotion in this piece. Nicely written.

Kaze~ :-D

[anxia]

Poignant but well written.

[Writer #00]

Great poem, a little tragic romance is always good now and then. : ). It reminded me of this song:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9zTFxbQCrJI

[Writer #00]

Great poem. A bit of tragic romance is always good for the soul : ). It reminded me of this song:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9zTFxbQCrJI

[Rhianne Ney]

I'll check it out then if I've time~!

[J. F. Charleston]

Well sometimes when you just write something it turns out really good. Great write. It also sounds as the character will never see the one they love ever again.

[Rhianne Ney]

That's right, he will never see the girl again actually (:

[B. Tatum]

Very good!

[Rhianne Ney]

thanks for reading (:

[Muhammad Qasim]

nice write and a traguc eeality if our era!!

[Rhianne Ney]

That's right (:

[Muhammad Qasim]

yeap!!

[Rhianne Ney]

(:

[Muhammad Qasim]

:)

[Ruby]

It's so sweet 100/100

[Rhianne Ney]

Thanks for the review! ;D Are you new?

[Ruby]

no I was Snowwhite and Angel but I changed me name I forgot to tell you sorry.

[Rhianne Ney]

Ah, okay... that's why it's quite weird...

[Ruby]

And now I am Ruby sorry if I keep changing on you. But some of my friends and I having watching anime and we changed the names on here to our fav chacaters names. :)

[Rhianne Ney]

I see...

[PurpleQuartz]

This is really sweet and sad. It's hard sometimes to write something that is not your feelings and it takes talent to do so. You have that talent.
Keep writing
-PurpleQuartz

[Rhianne Ney]

I will, please keep writing too