aw...you know what..you sounds like a cute kid right now...well but it's good that you have reaLISED THat it's a bad thing to do...but it's always best to accept our mistake...we can't run away from each it..it will catch us again...accepting our mistakes doesn't mean that we are bad or it's kind of insulting it means that we will make an effort not to do it agaiin!!
I love the way on how you related this to the real world situations, because everyone knows that certain feeling of blaming someone and feeling a huge amount of guilt. What an amazing piece!
aw...you know what..you sounds like a cute kid right now...well but it's good that you have reaLISED THat it's a bad thing to do...but it's always best to accept our mistake...we can't run away from each it..it will catch us again...accepting our mistakes doesn't mean that we are bad or it's kind of insulting it means that we will make an effort not to do it agaiin!!
Its a lesson to learn my friend, at times in our life we have gone through this kind of situation, it's best we move forward and learned the mistake we have gone through... understanding it makes us better in the next chapter of our lives...that defines who we are today!
so keep up, live up, make things better...
very well expressed, i enjoyed its innocently cute nature...
Great work kabayan!!!
Everything you speak in this poem is true. Yes, I am guilty of sometimes pushing the blame onto others, but then again..don't we all do it? Sometimes we don't want to accept that we are in the wrong, even though we have to.
When one points a finger at another, there are 3 pointing back at oneself. I enjoyed the poem immensely but when one has done wrong it is better to admit and go on, thus the lesson is learned. If you did no wrong then just go on, for the wrong-doers shall be found and judged accordingly. When younger I felt this way alot, even now I get in the flesh and judge, pointing to another. I try not to though, so I remember what I had said at one point then I pray. It is not the answer for all, but for me it is. You write as one who can see past the veil of what everyone else says. Saying truth in simplicity. Be well. :)
WE all do it. We also fail to accept our own destiny and let others tell us what we should and should not achieve. Let your words speak for you because you have a telent not to be wasted. This sisa short piece but it conveys a message so well.
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I wrote this because I do it to lighten the burden... (:
really, you're so kind for stopping by... thanks a lot
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I will, thanks for the advice and nice to meet 'cha
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