This poem makes me mourn for all those who have been bullied or hurt by all the pathetic people who think they are above everyone else. It's hard to be optimistic when the world is as filthy as it is.
They say keep your friends close and your enemies closer, but I don't agree with that. I'd say keep your values close and God closer.
Deep poem you have here.
Posted 12 Years Ago
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12 Years Ago
thank you for the review... that's right I can't agree with keep your enemies closer also... (:
( ´ ▽ ` )ノ please feel better, even if you're 'so-so' you should be 'perfect'!
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Yeah, I feel better actually, there's nothing wrong with me at the moment I accept that sometimes th.. read moreYeah, I feel better actually, there's nothing wrong with me at the moment I accept that sometimes there are just a lot of differences on people that we all should comprehend (:
Being young, learning to cope with life really does hurt sometimes , and deeply. Thing is to learn how to be comfortable in your own skin, remember, you're unique, there's nobody on the planet exactly like you. Be proud of that, and, stand your ground with pride. Your writing show great heart and spirit .. make use of both and fly .. and fly hight, love.. in time. And, just to finish my lecture (not meant as one) work on being optimistic .. pessimism gets you nowhere but the box of tissues and a dark corner!!! :)
I hate bullying. I have seen so many cases on it and even wrote a speech, but I can feel pain and sadness is this piece. I hope everything gets better. Thank you for sharing.
It's so sad, yet I can truly relate to everything you have written. That feeling of someone pushing you into such a wrong direction that you just feel so damned awful.
As someone that's been through this so many times, I've come to learn that we walk on this to not please others, to not base ourselves on what others want us to be. In the end it'll just be us to determine our happiness and our future.
I do so admire your poem very much as it opens our eyes to each and everyone that has been treated this way and remind ourselves to never treat others that wrongly.
yet there is strength in these words....because we can not change to suit anyone else...we can only change to suit ourselves...people have to take us as we are.
jacob
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Thanks chuu~! Sir Jacob, that is an inspiring thing to say (:
I hate bullying.
Nobody must feel stronger than the others because we have our own talent and skill. Nobody is perfect. We all have strengths and weaknesses.
Love yourself. Try not to be a pessimistic person. With that, you will not let them hurt you anymore, and they will see that you are not weak one just like before.
Check out my poem "Who Are You". That's about bullying.
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