Death for a Loved One

My tears wont ever bring you back,
If I can go back to those hours,
The precious moments, I miss
I should've held your hand back then.

How sad your fate had been,
Dying without no trace of me,
Death doesn't own a heart,
How hard it gripped you.

I shouldn't have left you,
I should have turned and run back to you,
Why did fate separate us both?
I wish I can go back in time,
And hold you in my arms, once again.

Author's Note

tell me if I don't have a point here... I write about love sometimes but I don't fully understand love... thank you and please review (:

Reviews

[J. F. Charleston]

Well it's full of regret of a choice. I believe love is my specialty (I'm not meaning to boast about it) You have a point that lots of people think on when it's too late. I want to read more of your stuff.

[Rhianne Ney]

thanks for the kind review... I can't post much about love because some may not sound real

[J. F. Charleston]

I meant writing about love. It's a really good poem.

[Ufi Auttorri ~ Amy C. T..]

Welcome to the club. I venture to say there isn't a human that has ever been born that understand "love"; after all it's an abstraction that, in theory, cannot be put into words. Actions, perhaps, or the silence between moments of life and death. I'm sure you have a some points: they died, you weren't there, you have remorse. On the other hand, this line I don't get at all, "...Dying without no trace of me," Is it just poorly worded or is that what you really meant to say? All in all, I liked it though so don't think I'm bashing it unnecessarily. :)

[Rhianne Ney]

the narrator means that the person who died wasn't able to spend time with the other person because she broke up with him..

[Ufi Auttorri ~ Amy C. T. Serrat]

ah, ok - thanks! :)

[Anonymous Girl]

By the sound of this poem I think you understand love, FULLY. Really wonderful. ^^

[Rhianne Ney]

thank you... I don't want to sound lime I'm trying so hard to write it... (:

[Anonymous Girl]

Its okay. And you don't sound lime; love poems are hard to write. :)