An Unwanted Child

about a fetus talking to her mom

I was hoping to be born,
When I get out I will give my mother joy,
"You need to be removed from me"
Mother, what are you saying?

Do you remember when you said I was important to you?
Why are you discarding me now?
Do you think I'm just one of your mistakes?
Mother, I'm not, I'm a blessing.

What's this?
I feel like there's someone coming,
I will try to escape from this,
I want to be born as your child.

My perpetrator tightens its grip and crushed my upper body,
What shall I do? Please help me!
Please don't let them destroy me!

Why can't you hear my please?
Mother, I love you, I want to see you
What do you really want, Mom?
Do you hate me?

I tried to blink but it's the end,
I'm sorry, Mommy I didn't hold on til the end.
My dream to see you and this world
Was quickly crushed by the heartless perpetrator.

Author's Note

I wrote this 2 years ago... i just found it the other day... My inspiration here is those children who are not given the chance to live.. i hope this message can reach everyone... (:

Reviews

[Tai Ryens]

I'm not going to say anything, being pro-choice and all..

[Rhianne Ney]

Oh, but thanks for dropping by~

[Patricia B. Hepler]

Intriguing perspective on abortion; impressive. Definitely a re-read. ph

[Rhianne Ney]

Thanks for reading (: and reviewing~

[Simone]

oh my goodness i LOVE this. amazing. seriously. wow. very very moving.

[Rhianne Ney]

thank you for your comment...thanks for the encouragement (:

[Eile MacIntyre]

Incredibly powerful and full of meaning.

[Rhianne Ney]

thanks for the comment... I hate abortionists because sometimes they don't consider the baby's feelings inside them

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I loved it. This poem is so inspiring and outstanding, yet it is sad.
Excellent job!
100/100

[Rhianne Ney]

thank you