You're the reason why...

crush

Fixing my looks to be beautiful,
Grooming my hair to be presentable
Looking at the mirror to be sure,
You're the reason why these things are done.

Waiting for a text message every night,
Trying to control this feeling with all my might
Patiently waiting for my phone to ring
Only to get a message from him.

What happened to me?
I can't think of anything already
This is something unusual
I woke up with my heart declaring love.

You're the reason why I'm doing this
You've been in my heart for three months
I'm sorry to notice you
I didn't mean to fall for you.

Author's Note

please review.. thanks

Reviews

[Writer #00]

This was so well written; it very accurately illustrates the uneasy, emotionally unbalanced equation in the hearts of those who have found a particular interest in someone else. The last stanza is bittersweet, as if the love is an accident that you regret and are enslaved to...yet, at the same time tighten the locks around your shackles.

lucky guy/100

[Rhianne Ney]

(; thanks for your kind review (: as always~!

[Writer #00]

No problem, I enjoyed reading it.

[Rhianne Ney]

(: thanks

[zainul]

A great work.
You painted the tumult in your heart so nicely.
It indicates that love is divine and beautiful.
One has to groom to welcome one's lover so carefully.
Just look back to the old piece how lovely it was written.

[Rhianne Ney]

Thanks for the inspiring review, sir (:

[Hotaru]

i could really relate to this...
remembering those crazy feelings...hmmm.. i guess you could read it again and improve it... try adding more of the "crazy things" .... girls unconsciously do when they are inlove

[∠( ᐛ 」..]

This poem is so describing and amazing. I like flow of words and thoughts.
Excellent job!
100/100

[Rhianne Ney]

thanks again,

[Irvette Dauphine]

yea.. i like it.. :)
sometimes i feel it too..
great job..

[Rhianne Ney]

thanks for the comment i've been waiting to hear something from a writer'snet writer (: