To my Thirteen year old self

future to past self

Hi, Rhianne,  I am you in the future but I want to remind you that you can always change your future. Please forget the past that is blinding you from your dreams. Live for the present so you can face the future with a head held up high.

      You’re a paranoid person in the future, you don’t trust anyone and you’re always left alone, I don’t want that to happen so please try your hardest to change and do your best. Open up from your shell and ran outside, mark your footprints in the ground, feel the breeze greeting you as you go; so with the touch of sunlight on your skin, run as far as you can and be free. You’re unique and you’ll never be anyone else, Love yourself and be happy. Good luck, I know you can do it.

Author's Note

thanks for the kind reviews(:

Reviews

[Serenity Faith]

I wish I could've given my thirteen year old self as good advice as you did. But then I realize that my troubles that I faced made me who I am today. I might find myself in a bit of a rut sometimes, but I always step forward. I loved the encouragement in your story. Never give up on your dreams! And know you're not alone. We're all here for you whenever you need us. We might not be able to see you in perrson, but sometimes receiving encouragement if only through writing helps with healing a hurt heart.

[Rhianne Ney]

Thanks a lot for a good message, I appreciate it ;D

[kublakhan27]

Even though I am a bit older than you are, I do relate totally to what you're saying...in fact I feel like it's about my own past/present to some extent...of course, that doesn't mean I'm making it all about me, this is certainly a personal piece, and sometimes we have to get these things out, and are usually stronger for it.

[Rhianne Ney]

thanks for reading

[Anonymous Girl]

I loved it how you went back to yourself and gave advice, I wish we could really do it.
Liked it a lot.
100/100

[Rhianne Ney]

thanks for reading

[Anonymous Girl]

No problem :)

[gombeggar]

nice idea...to warn yerself like that...hope it all works out fer ya ;)

[Rhianne Ney]

thanks("

[Soul Fire]

Great work! reminds me of a piece I did a letter to my 11year old self...haven't posted it yet,but anyway great job! :D

[Rhianne Ney]

thanks for the review (:

[Soul Fire]

you're welcome :D

[Tai Ryens]

If only it were that easy to change in a snap . . .

[Rhianne Ney]

that's right I don't know what part of 13 year old Rhianne had changed

[semppu]

It's creative, detailed, and humorous without having to tell a joke. Nice for a young writer.

[Rhianne Ney]

thanks

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Hi Rhianne, You are going to tell me off in a minute. I can feel it coming! I liked this a lot. It was funny yet serious. It read well and had a good feeling of real conversation. There are a few errors in the piece though which I offer correction for!
try your hardest to change and do your best. Open up from your shell and run outside, mark your footprints in the ground, feel the breeze greeting you as you go on; so with the touch of sunlight in your skin, run as far as you can and

[Rhianne Ney]

I will edit it... thanks

[Bluefire]

Thats some sweet advice. Good job :)

[Rhianne Ney]

(:

[Mia]

Wouldn't it be great if we could go back and give ourselves advice? We can't and you're right...the past is the past we move forward...living for the now because that is what matters, we're not guaranteed tomorrow. That is some good advice you give yourself!

[Rhianne Ney]

thank you for reviewing (:

[Mia]

No problem :)