Women's Union

Based primarily on the women's war effort during World War II but this can certainly be applied to any contemporary war.

Bang, Bang, Bang, 

We soldier on, on, on 

Work, work, work, 

Our men are gone, gone, gone 

Boom, boom, boom, 

The bombs are dropped, dropped, dropped 

Fix, fix, fix, 

We can’t be stopped, stopped, stopped 

Smash, smash, smash, 

Brutish thugs fight, fight, fight 

Sweat, sweat, sweat 

Fake soldiers with no might, might, might

Pow, pow, pow, 

The ballistics fall, fall, fall 

Wait, wait, wait, 

Union is one, union is all 

Author's Note

Made this for a contest and because I really needed to just write something! I haven't written for months now so it feels good to get back into it!

Reviews

[Dusted Armor]

This is a great piece the flow and style i really liked as if i was there. Awesome keep penning

[YanZeros]

Very well written the sounding words recreates the imagery of chaos! During war many men lost their lives. Where the country was left behind to the hands of Women. Who helped bringing back peace to the country again. Lovin' this poetry Rhia Thurman

[Dusted Armor]

Love the way it's words twist for the over-all , stanza's were great for this piece
and the words profound to its meaning.Keep penning great job

[Rhia Barton]

Thank you very much for the review! :)

[Dusted Armor]

Your welcome, Thankyou in return..

[MAC]

wow...this is a solid write. the structured repetitiveness creates the feel of war and destruction. brilliantly done, Rhia!

[Rhia Barton]

Thank you very much for your feedback! I appreciate it ^^