The Guy of my Dreams

a poem about the boy I loved then lost.

Brown eyes and brown hair

a heartbreaking smile

a bad a*s attitude

and my heart on a platter.

He makes me want to dance

in the most embarrasing way

He makes me wish I was someone else

someone worth it

then again

he makes me proud of myself

and want to do something with my life

like no one else could

He laughs at all my jokes

even the stupid ones

He makes me laugh until my sides hurt

He makes me feel

good

happy

loved.

Because he cares about me.

Even when it's not important.

Never has he made fun of me, not once.

 

Reviews

[Rhena Le Roi]

Funny. The guy i'm talking about has a girlfriend... that's not me. I wrote this poem about my best friend and I thought that I was in love with him, but it was not the same for him. Everything in that poem was true, but for some reason, the poem just... feels wrong. )':