overcome

overcome

A Poem by Rheia

darkness, this is fear
i'm black and white, all the same
you will not conquer

© 2018 Rheia


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I reread this to many times to count and it made me argue within myself about it. Maybe that's what you were going for...At least for me that's how it was taken. I was confused which turned into interests then manifested itself into an argument then anger within myself. So simple and not really making any sense still brought on a lot of emotions in a short amount of time. I like it!

Posted 7 Years Ago


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oh...really like power and resolve of this ... your word choices imply a very deep, honest picture... and truism ...i do think you are right about racists ..they have so much fear inside them :( well done says i!
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Posted 7 Years Ago


I reread this to many times to count and it made me argue within myself about it. Maybe that's what you were going for...At least for me that's how it was taken. I was confused which turned into interests then manifested itself into an argument then anger within myself. So simple and not really making any sense still brought on a lot of emotions in a short amount of time. I like it!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on January 4, 2018
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Tags: dark, fear, overcome, hope, fight, never give up, haiku, poetry

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Rheia
Rheia

Perth, WA, Australia



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I love music, art and writing. Reading, too, of course. I'm really bad at planning and sticking with a story, so I started sticking to shorter stories, even poetry. more..

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