Crazy

Voices talking, thoughts swirling

Nothing but noises inside this head of mine

Broken heart, broken body

Nothing new, but this pain is driving me…

 

Crazy, I can’t think straight.

Crazy, pain is blinding me.

Crazy, no one understands.

I am crazy.

 

I am here, you are there.

So far away, and yet so close to me

Unknown heart, useless body,

I hear you telling me that I’m…

 

Crazy, I can’t think straight,

Crazy, Pain is blinding me.

Crazy, no one understands.

I am crazy.

 

Stop talking, leave me silent!

I can’t bear these noises in my head.

Heal my heart, heal my body.

I don’t want this pain to drive me…

 

Crazy, I need you to help me.

Crazy, please take this pain.

Crazy, I know you understand.

I must be crazy. 

Reviews

[joshua deathdealer]

This write feels different for you but I love it. Excellent work.

[Chris Williams]

This piece feels kind of detached, like you know all these feelings are there, but they've overwhelmed you past the point of being able to feel. It's very haunting.

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I like this kind of crazy!
I can feel the emotions.
I have went through somthing simliar to this piece.
I can feel this. So nicely expressed & written.