Alone and Unheard

 

Late nights I wander the land,

Longing, hoping that I might see something,

Hear someone, anyone but me.

I am cast into a dark shadow, thrown into a fiery abyss.

My heart cries out, but Alas!  It is always missed.

The Sun rises and falls,

And the full moon comes and goes,

But still I hear naught but the sound of my own pounding heart as I run, hide,

Flee from all that I have loved, and hold dear.

I am alone.

Lost to a world that will not accept me,

To a life full of Longings that nothing can fill.

Reviews

[TJ]

This piece really relates the longing and despair if the narrator well. He faces such deep loneliness although it seems self inflicted.
Good write.

[Chris Williams]

I like this in that it captures that kind of loneliness very well.

[Felix Soto]

i get a sense of insomnia. Sleepless nights, need for something unobtainable

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I can feel the longing in this.
Written so well, such an emotional write.
So very well written and expressed.