Rock When the Water Comes

1st poem I wrote my Senior year.....I like it. I hope you do too :D

Pain and anger coursing through my veins.

I shake my head to clear the clouds of confusion.

I stand there, my heart shuttering with the feelings you give me, but also with the pain you make it feel.

On the outside, I smile, hug you and walk away, determinded to hide the effect you have on me; knowing you will never change even if I don't.

Inside I'm getting torn up, like a scratching post used for lions.

My heart being ripped out slowly.

Feels as if a toothpick is being used to poke and prod around in the hole you've created while making it bigger.

I never tell you that you hurt me anymore because last time, it only made it worse.

I have realized that you will always stay the same because you don't care who you hurt.

All you care about is getting what you want and you'll do the impossible to get it.

Yes, your words say the opposite, but I've known you longer than most.

If I've learned anything from you, it's to listen to your actions because like I said: you will do whatever it takes to get what you want.

If I know that you'll never change, why does it hurt so much?

Because I knew that with God's help, I could've given you, not what you wanted most, but what you needed the most: a friend to the end.

Author's Note

Ignore grammer problems and please tell me what you think :D? This isn't the complete original.....I thought it needed work.......it still does because it's really bad, but oh well :)

Reviews

["Longing from Ages"]

good show......

[The Dreamer]

Nice work :) - it reminded me of someone i know.
itll be great when you edit it, post the original soon.