Dreams For Us

Our night time world.
Guitar songs that sound like velvet.

They sing about long roads.
Freedom.
The way back home.

I look at you and know, you're such a man now.
I see front porch nights with you.
Midnight, summer rovings with our friends.

I see passion in your fingers.
Babies in your eyes.

Reviews

[Jack...]

So very beautiful and loving is your poem today. Nicely penned.

[Eli Lane]

Thank you, kind sir. It was written with a lot of love from inside :)

[Jiah]

LOVELY. : )
beautiful one!

[Eli Lane]

Well, thank you!:)

[MsJewel]

This is so beautifully soft and romantic... It must be true love to look in another's eyes and see a beautiful future -

I see passion in your fingers.
Babies in your eyes...
beautiful!
:) Julie

[Eli Lane]

I just noticed this review! Thank you for taking the time to read my writing:) and yes, it is about the love of my life, who is now my husband. And though this poem is a year old, the babies in his eyes, turned out to be an accurate prediction

[MsJewel]

Congratulations!