Bleed

A Senryu

In excited bliss

In fickle titillation

Dignity bleeds dry

Author's Note

I can't decide to make the last line; Bleeds dry dignity or Bleed dry dignity

Reviews

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

A wonderfully written, and deep thought. Loved the darkness felt, nicely done!

[Emerald Seas]

There is a lot being left unsaid under the words. Yet, I find a clear message in this exquisite write, full of wisdom.

All should be spontaneous,
And read and reviewd that way too
As this is not an haiku or senryu
But me to you.

Excellent.