Deeper

I want more from deeper wells of my soul

stronger connections

clearer purer love

honor and

dignity

To have a stronger impact

touching others lives

Reviews

[light and ashes]

This is perfect, in my opinion. There is not much greater resolve in human beings than this. Well conveyed. I would give this a perfect score, if I could.

[Revery]

Thank you so much!

[light and ashes]

You are so very welcome.
:)

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Deeper
Revery,
This poem comes across to me as a desire to grow, to mature:
"I want more from deeper wells of my soul"
Then the moral strength is sought:
"honor and dignity"
Purpose:
"to have a stronger impact
touching other's lives."
It is a wonderful thing to find life and purpose!
Blessings,
Kathy

[Revery]

:) thank you

[Sami Khalil]

Words of wisdom and colors of beauty... Well done dear poet...

[Revery]

This one just poured out from somewhere within. Funny how we think sometimes some of our writing is just scratching out some thoughts and it turns out to impact my readings with a little more weight than I expected. Thank you for your review.

[Sami Khalil]

I agree ... You are quite welcome...

[Revery]

All starts within the change of yourself, as you said it here beautifully. This is so awesome, so well and wise. I dig this. You're the mirror to people, and people react, because of your great karma.

Thank you for posting this.
Lovely write.

E.L.

[Revery]

Thank you dear, I love your sweet comments.

:)

[Brianna Brie]

Awesome poem! It is so very passionate!

[Revery]

Thank you Brianna. :)

[Baby Ricochet]

Beautiful sentiment. Thanx

[Revery]

Thanks man.

[rivers]

Evocative transparent honesty...You are so much more than you know and yet I understand your compassionate thinking completely...Open minded soul searching is a virtue, a never ending process of growth and understanding. Knowing when we reveal introspection expecting nothing in return, we get so much more insight and understanding in return. A noble, inspirational write...

[Nautili]

So thoughtful, so like you. I think you have ripples of influence where you are not even aware.

[Harley (arbiter)]

Well you're better than me. I could care less about the other people I don't even know. I mean my friends yeah but eh. Good write. Simple. I love simple things. Life is so complicated and the simple things make it better. Nice write