I set out on a journey into the coffers of the
library, into the deepest wells of knowledge, far back in the basement of this
institution, in the dark crevasses looking for wisdom of how to come to
life.
In curious seeking I found hidden wisdom and was instantly transformed for the
better. The epiphany I desired was right
before my wearied eyes.
To test my new
experience I looked for a muse among the simple. I looked curiously onto the daisy sitting on
the table and quickly noticed more and in different ways as my senses and being
became more aware, more dimensional. Where as before I saw just a flower Now A
delicate blushing flower pushes gently upward in its intrepid being to reach
desperately for needed light and existential life. The bursting out of the flowers in bloom not
only captivates the eyes but entranced the heart. This simple process was both ancient and
eternal to the regenerated life that cycles but is ever present in the
now.
Oh this changes everything
I can speak of nothing out of everything
Now
Stronger
Finding myself on higher plateau with a more illuminated vantage point and not only a
broader view but new magic to capture it, to translate it back from my own
reality, and for it to be a truth onto itself.
The sense of a breakout moment, feeling life course through my veins as I begin
to dance with and seduce the words. They
are mine and I not only own them but they are my lover. The words them self are my muse.
Before I struggled to write and now I can’t stop the overflow of treasures from
my heart and being. I can’t stop as I
scribe the words onto the walls of poetry!
no prob:) I tried to read some but they were rated mature and I gotta be 18 for those lol
11 Years Ago
Not all of my work is that though. Try these poems: Linger, Once, Yellow, Poet
I think Yel.. read moreNot all of my work is that though. Try these poems: Linger, Once, Yellow, Poet
I think Yellow has the most potential to be a standout among all my work.
this is really beautiful...
full of dripping emotions in words...
letting the feelings guides the words in fluent matter...
I can speak of nothing
out of everything
Now
Stronger
Finding myself
on higher plateau
with a more illuminated
vantage point
~ love this lines, its shows how people get stronger..
well done my friend.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank you Pax, your a gentleman and a light to us all.
Loved the Frensh in it...
Rev, you always make masterpieces
This one is one of my favs!
I love the art's eye in you, and
How you can metaphor still lives with love.
Exeptional write!
E.L.
Posted 12 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
How did miss, saying thank you for this review. Thank You Elisa. Your reviews mean so much to me gi.. read moreHow did miss, saying thank you for this review. Thank You Elisa. Your reviews mean so much to me given how much admiration I hold for you. :)
Poetry is kind of like a blossoming flower, I like the metaphor for that used earlier, very creative.
Posted 12 Years Ago
12 Years Ago
Thank you for your review. This poem flowed out as I was trying some of the techniques I had read a.. read moreThank you for your review. This poem flowed out as I was trying some of the techniques I had read about in a poetry book, I got from the library. Yes, lol, the poem is about itself.
I am a technical writer by profession. I'm married with three wonderful children. My poetry deals
with the struggles and contrasts between the spiritual and the sensual. My life has been rich and bl.. more..