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Re-posting of an older Poem

I want to find the gate
into your secret garden

Steal my way
into your dreams
and dance
with you in reverie

I want to be
the artist
of your pleasure and
the strength
of hope unseen

I want to please you
with every move and
show an understanding
of your sensitivity

open your heart before me
and receive my strength

I’m yours

Author's Note

I made some changes.

Reviews

Such a marvelous love ode to the one you wrote this for. Excellent work mister!

[J. J. Nightingale]

Sweet giving thoughts ...


Jasmine

[Priscilla Sayers]

A beautiful poem.

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

I'm not sure if Ive read the original but this is wonderfully penned. Sensual, and touching write. Nicely done, Revery!

[Mockingbird]

this is very sensual in the most subtle ways. i like the directness. great poem.

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that is a lovely image..inviting someone into your heart..gorgeous

[Muse]

I loved the original...I wish I knew what you did differently..it still flows very well.
The inspiration is solid. You show a cellar door that has been opened. No more wondering...no more peaking through key holes. No more waiting.....

[Nautili]

I enjoyed reading this, seductive yet sweet. Really a nice feel to it, kind of dreamy.

[TheSweet]

There is a hidden mutuallity in this, suggesting that you're leading, but you're also under command. Giving strength so that you can gain strength. With this added depth in mind. Very well done :)