some possible continuations. Let's spend minutes, hours and weeks and years together. Let's make history and magic together. Let's live on the simple side of life with lazy days doing nothing together. Let's only venture out to feel new horizons, nibble on exquisite food in chic bistros, and people watch in exotic places. I'll study and know the simple things that make you feel happy, make you feel loved. Everytime I kiss you I will consider it challenge and art to make it the most passionate we've ever shared.
Hmm... I never left a review on this before - How did I miss that?
Beautifully articulated with resounding passion and a deeply felt love in each line. Simply stated but with elegance. Well done!
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank you. I wrote this ages ago while I was still ignorant and not jaded, lol, jk. I think that t.. read moreThank you. I wrote this ages ago while I was still ignorant and not jaded, lol, jk. I think that type of passion is somewhere inside.
i find this breath-takingly beautiful...
its show how much is your love to this person...
the strengh of the poem is your passion for something more...
all love...
awesome job my friend!
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank you Pax. Seems like ages since I wrote this.
This is very beautiful, very honest, doesn't need to be resticted to those over eighteen, this is one that could be shared with any age so that every person could enjoy.
i like how you emphasise wanting to please the other rather than yourself, i like your use of the word ...artist and dance in this it create good images. Caring about a persons sensitivity and coming from a place of imparting strength shows the maturity in this write. Amazing picture. Beautiful write.
Beaaauutiful!!! This made me smile because it's so sweet and romantic. I love how one is willing to give to another with such affection... oh the joy to truely give to that person...
Heartfelt and simply magnifient. This is wonderful!!
I am a technical writer by profession. I'm married with three wonderful children. My poetry deals
with the struggles and contrasts between the spiritual and the sensual. My life has been rich and bl.. more..