Fade

The fire burned lower

 and faded into silky 

 Hues of Grey Smoke

Reviews

[patricia]

good haiku. nice imagery. like how you displayed it with so much space around.
silky Hues of Grey Smoke ..subtle. enjoyed.

[Muse]

good good

I liked the dead air space..followed by the font...don't know why..but it adds to the enigma of it all.

[Teri B]

Another view of fire...

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what a soothing image..short but sweet.

[Mockingbird]

leaves a warm image. the haiku syllable scheme is 5/7/5. but it could be a free form of haiku. i really liked it.

[Revery]

Aarontastic, you do see that it's haiku, right? It's my first attempt at it. Notice the correct syllable count. The first two lines are intentional in their simplicity.

[Aarontastic]

Very economical :) It definitely evokes an image. but personally, I think that you should do something extra amazing with a poem this short if you want it to stand out; the third stanza is cool but the first and second ones could be rendered in more unique language.

[Blue Ivory]

I love it! It's brilliant :P It would've never occurred to me to find something so simple yet so fantastic!