Illusion of me

The need to express myself

I ache to splash my blood on the page,
to pour myself out, wonder, love and rage.
I am neatly put together, attempting perfect you see.
Few know the complex paradoxes of me.

Reviews

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

Love it..........few ever do really know us.......sometimes we don't even know ourselves.

[Revery]

Thank you so much for reading and giving such a sweet comment. :)

[Frieda P]

I think you've accomplished that right here, beautiful piece of work, so few words, such a huge message. It's perfect.

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Thank you Frieda. I appreciate you reading and commenting.

[Jagged memory]

This is pretty darn good! Luv this write. so very poetic

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Thank you. I appreciate you reading and commenting. :)

[Tate Morgan]

very well done

[Revery]

Tate, thank you for reading and commenting.

[sharonlee]

Very deep and probing.

[Revery]

Thank you Sharonlee.

[Brianna Brie]

Awesome write! Enjoyed reading it several times ;)

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Thank you Brianna. :)

[Revery]

A number of beautiful elements of your character, if you ask me, I see your love for boxing as my husband share with you back in your words. But purity, passion and love win for me in paradoxical brilliance. Beautiful decomposed as a short but clear music piece...

E.L. :)

[Revery]

How did I miss this. Thank you Elisa, I love you comments on my work. My love for boxing come from being the youngest of eight boys, haha.

You're always are welcome dear. Your work is of my caliber.

[Sami Khalil]

I like to know the paradoxes of you . You make the reader wonder .

[Revery]

Thank you, the paradoxes are not deep but maybe the contrast is sharp, lol

[Sami Khalil]

Thought provoking . I have to think about that one...

[AleyshaRosa]

I respect and love how you used so few words to paint such a vivid picture
koodoos

[Revery]

Thank you

[Mia]

Short and sweet…but so far from simple. This is amazing. Are you incredible or are you incredible!