Signs of life

In the long distance
in between,
with nothing in sight
either way,
a single sound is uttered.

Author's Note

Photo credit: me. @revery.official
Copyright

Reviews

[JessyJacob]

Thank you. Hope you know now many truths.

[Betty Hermelee]

This is a bit hauntingly beautiful….. in empty, large spaces a voice is muted. Like an echo….. otherwise complete silence…..even though short, this gives the reader something to muse over…. Well written…thanks for sharing…
Best, B

[Revery]

Thank you Betty

[Betty Hermelee]

You’re very welcome!
Warmly, B

[emmajoygreen]

VAST often dulls or overwhelms the senses. A grain of sand shimmers in sunlight or in a desert night.
As does your brief poem.

[Revery]

It speaks of my intermittent visits here. I could only hope that the few lines I can eek out would shimmer some. ;)

[emmajoygreen]

Of course they do.

[AYVID N]

Dear Revery,

This is a brilliant interpretation of life. Infinity stretches on either side, that is before birth and after death and in between, life is 'uttered' so briefly. A wonderful thought.

[Revery]

Thank you so much. I've always been a fan of grasping the complex in a frame of simplicity.

[Paris Hlad]

Hello, Revery,

Thank you for requesting my virtual friendship. I look forward to reading your work in the coming days. I am a retired grant writer, high school English teacher, and college prep instructor, living on the Carolina Coast. I'll be back and ready to read tomorrow morning.

For now, Peace & Best Wishes!

[Revery]

:) I'm late. Thank you.

[willweb]

And that sound echoes through the heart if the hearer is open to hearing it. Nicely done, short but sweet. 5 lines that say a lot. I believe this little poem will stay with me for a while. Thank you for sharing this.

[Revery]

That's a cool review. Thank you!