is right there, just before us
always within us and most available.
You know it when life looks like death,
the path to life is mistaken as the path to death
in the hollows of desperation when aching cruelty demands more
we jump off the cliff into a free fall
into epic and vital change.
The depth and breadth of emotional capacity
is ripped open for more
when we thought we were completely
and utterly spent.
Embrace the pain and let it bring you
to a crystal clear razor sharp edge.
Epic rejuvenation, epic light
living purely in the heart
and honest in the soul
and just breathe and be.
What was meant to swallow me
is a genesis in every way.
Another remarkable poem. Thank you. The intensity and profundity of this piece makes me very curious about your journey and your life story. No need to divulge, of course, but there it is. :)
We do learn through our hard times. We learn to move onward because life is always worth it. Each life is an "Epic" and as we walk through ours, we can edit it to a certain degree. Wise life advice in your well written lines. Lots to think about. Lydi**
It is only through our struggles that we learn to appreciate the blessings and light.
Good to see you here, G. There is a deep, profound message within these lines. Well executed without being too heavy. You guide the reader gently through so they may grasp the meaning for themselves.
Those last few stanzas are superb!
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank you Sirrah. I appreciate you coming by and reading. :)
Each thread woven affects the other when plucked. Have swam the depths of sorrow and pain seeing you have captured the emotion beautifully. Splendid read and write.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank you Brandon. I appreciate you reading and commenting.
"Embrace the pain
and let it bring you
to a crystal clear razor sharp edge.
Epic rejuvenation,
epic light
living purely in the heart
and honest in the soul
and just breathe
and be. "
You words are an epitomy of wisdom wrapped in a beautiful poetic language...:)
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Thank you again Sir. I very much appreciate you reading and commenting.
There are times when a being feels more than desperate, that he or she can't sink any lower, physically, mentally, spiritually. Life, time, only exists in darkness. Until somehow, some time there's a moment when a minute glimmer of light shines. Grows brighter, speck by speck by speck until .. in spite of back.sliding, in spite of needing immediacy, life, truth, comfort, trust, faith and all other vitasl needs return .. to be .. cherished.
'.. epic light ~ living purely in the heart ~ and honest in the soul ~ and just breathe and be. .. '
Perhaps.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Emma, I am so honored for you to read and comment on my words. Your comment resonates with me. Tha.. read moreEmma, I am so honored for you to read and comment on my words. Your comment resonates with me. Thank you
" Embrace the pain and let it bring you ".
There is dignity in bearing the pain for it gives birth to a greater forms of virtue. Courage is born in the middle of fear. Amibiality is born in the middle of dishonesty and so on...
The poetic persona here is showing much courage, I admire.
Posted 11 Years Ago
11 Years Ago
Belle, thank you so much for such sweet words. I appreciate you reading and being here. G
I am a technical writer by profession. I'm married with three wonderful children. My poetry deals
with the struggles and contrasts between the spiritual and the sensual. My life has been rich and bl.. more..